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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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She Satiates my every field Shunting lily pads away. Planting daffodils that weigh. Pristine in my valley green Hewing colors mystic new Resurrecting Randy’s view. Flaps her wings in flattery Soughs away my wrinkled brow Allowing time to slow some how. Curtails the black and blind of veil The Jonah whale that swallowed me Forever drifting in the sea Zen me to life again, a Coup beyond the spoil of true Made me whole, made me new. And though I’m full to overstuff Just love for her seems not enough. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this a lot, the last lines wrapped it up perfectly. Sandra |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When enough cannot be said for She, chances are, She heard the silence... applauding, applauding... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cat, Thank you so much for the allot. *L* Sunshine, A bow for the applause. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sy, This is great and the word combinations well perfect, so much enjoyed this beauty. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, A lovely comment, thank you. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hewing colors mystic new Resurrecting Randy’s view. Flaps her wings in flattery Soughs away my wrinkled brow Allowing time to slow some how. Curtails the black and blind of veil The Jonah whale that swallowed me Forever drifting in the sea Zen me to life again, a Coup beyond the spoil of true Made me whole, made me new. And though I’m full to overstuff Just love for her seems not enough. ======================================== A Tinkerbell whispered in my ear ... Spoke a message for one held dear. Said to tell you ... that "she" knew ... Said to tell you ... "she" feels the same way too. Spoke of ringing bells and chinging chimes. Spoke of cadenced kisses and embraces of rhyme. Whispered words of tea for two among the butterflies, Whispered words of rainbowed flights across Eden's skies. Then "she" said you and that randy dragon were hot stuff ... Said to tell you love and poetry was so much more than "just enough." ~~~~~~~~~ *winkiewinkie*  me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have wormed your way through butter sauce So now I'll try some apple sauce. We fly in a world of dreamers paste But God how I love the taste. Winkiewinkie forever Stinky. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Yeah! How could you fully describe the man/woman that you love? I don't think you could, but you've done a pretty good job there! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is exquisite! The title immediately brought to mind the song "She" which played over and over in my mind as I read this piece. Beautiful Sy! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You delight this I with your love for butterfly Hugs! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just loved this Seymour - it was great! jwesley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the heart and soul of a lover shines so well in this wonderful poem to "She" She is very blessed to be so loved. Magnificent. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mon Cherie, Thank you sweet. Enchantress, Thank you love. Martie, And I thank you. *L* Jwestley, Thanks for the great. JM, Once again you escape on wings. Winkiewinkie. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes life seems fresh and new when you feel love...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Thank you James and yes it does. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Seymour, you are soooooooo romantic, your love for her shines in every word of this beautiful poem! (smiles) She will love you forever, sweet friend, and cherish the love your heart will always give her! (big hugggsssssss) Sooooooooo gorgeous!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, And May love and light always shine upon you! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Flaps her wings in flattery Soughs away my wrinkled brow Allowing time to slow some how. --------------- Zen me to life again, a Coup beyond the spoil of true Made me whole, made me new. And though I’m full to overstuff Just love for her seems not enough. --------------------- Marvelously beautiful.....this is a keeper. I really loved it.... Your eloquence and choice of words are wonderful... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MyEnchanted, Thank you for the wonderful comment. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
That's a "wonderful life". You are brimming over and sharing the cup here with your words. That's just like the Sy that you are. Cheers to a wonderful flow! Sincerely, Regina |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Thank you and *L* |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You flow with wonderful words amazes me once more.Teriffic job. Peaches |
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