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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-12-01 12:17 PM



“WALKING TOGETHER”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
We walk together, him and me,
in some parallel universe,
for we have the same thoughts,
writing and sharing words in
our poetry…

Emptiness is part of our lives,
hushed whispers I also hear,
and hearts at one time or another
broken in two, not knowing why…

I too wish to be part of them,
understanding we only ask, to look
at what they do not care to
see, to know my thoughts, as
he needs them to know his…

The loneliness that overcomes,
in two different worlds, but
the same, sharing, even though
one can’t see the other, but we
share, knowing the same feelings…

My decisions made, the same, as
the one whom I call my friend,
who made them also, for better
or worse, even with the
loneliness that we both know…

My friend Sven, I stand with
you, come what may, whatever
may be, but I ask, do not stand
alone, for I will walk by your side…
~~~~

© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-01 12:38 PM


BC~ this is a tender gift of friendship from the heart....it's great  
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2 posted 2001-12-01 12:41 PM


There are many of us here who will gladly walk alongside this wonderful man, including myself. That goes for you too, Bill.  Your poem is full of understanding and compassion.
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3 posted 2001-12-01 11:01 AM


This is great, Bill!

Kathleen (Kay)
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Sven
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4 posted 2001-12-01 08:33 PM


BC my friend. . .

there just aren't any words. . . except that it's good to know that we're on this path together. . .

thank you. . . I am honored to call you my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2001-12-01 08:38 PM


Awwww what a lovely tribute this is.
A friend is a precious gift : )

Enchantress
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6 posted 2001-12-01 08:45 PM


Oh Bill...this is great.  What a wonderful thing to see...I admire you...and also Sven.
You both can be my friends any day!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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7 posted 2001-12-01 08:48 PM


What a wonderful poem of friendship you have penned, Bill. This would touch anyones heart and I see that it has touched our dear Sven's. Tender loving hearts is also something very special you two share. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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