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0 posted 2001-11-30 08:26 PM


Healing

When my world is dark,
when i feel so alone and
totally helpless,
there you are to pick me up.
Your love healing all my hurt.

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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1 posted 2001-11-30 08:47 PM


...which is exactly what true love does. Very nicely said, RP  
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2 posted 2001-11-30 09:04 PM


A very timely poem. I am not feeling alone and helpless, just ill. And the morning news made me even more ill, as I really loved that GH. Thank you.
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3 posted 2001-11-30 09:19 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwww, I'm so happy for you, sweet Tara! (sigh) You deserve to be loved so so much and I just know he will bring you happiness! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-11-30 09:21 PM


Love is so powerful, it is amazing what it can heal. I love this poem. **hugs** I am glad that you have love to heal you.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-30 11:35 PM


Lovely....we should all have someone in our life like this.  
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6 posted 2001-12-01 12:13 PM


I am glad you are healed sweet friend!
I wish you nothing but the best because that is what you deserve.

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7 posted 2001-12-01 12:27 PM


Beautiful poem baby, I am so happy you found someone to turn those tears into smiles. Love will always guide your heart to happiness. Hugs and Kisses... Cubby   XOXO

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8 posted 2001-12-01 12:41 PM


awwww, so sweet Tara   loved this  
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9 posted 2001-12-02 12:09 PM


DeVine one..... while i appreciate the sentiment, the fact remains that the world wouldn't do too well with two of me. Therefore, i think you mean "everyone should have someone who treats them like this" :P :P :P :P :P
heh.
Tara, dear, as usual, your ability to express yourself so clearly in  so few words leaves me feeling like i have terminal diarrhea of the word processor.
beautiful, dear.
-Dave

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