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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-11-30 07:58 PM





I sleep
you wake me


pour yourself upon me in thickness
passions lit in melted quickness
beneath the petaled touch of your fire
fashioned ecstasy of embraces desire
to your warmth once again I turn
the glow inside me starts to burn
I am so at home within your arms
touch cast a spell it is my charm
kisses that release me, unencumbered
a magical tenderness, I abandon my slumber
embers flamed a burn to be felt
under passions fire of desire, we melt


"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-30 08:05 PM


Oh, wow wee, Helen, I'm loving this!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-30 08:17 PM


Oh my yes...this is pretty warm...and very well said!  
Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-11-30 09:21 PM




Mmmmmmmmmm...soooooooo beautiful and sexy! (smiles) This must have melted his heart when you read it to him! You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-30 09:24 PM


Sensually beautiful, so I absolutely love it. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2001-11-30 11:32 PM


1slick_lady - romantic are your writings. Meaninful are your words to read...

BC

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6 posted 2001-12-01 11:26 AM


Oh... this is so romantic!!  
SmartChick
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7 posted 2001-12-01 12:51 PM


Wow! This is just beautiful. You are so romantic. I like it.
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-12-01 01:34 PM


I want to melt...James
jwesley
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9 posted 2001-12-01 01:35 PM


Mmmm, my slick friend - the dreams and memories this envokes, and the thoughts that linger... (better quit while I'm still legal!!)

jwesley

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