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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-11-30 06:25 PM



(This is just a ramble of my mind for
all my passions friends whose words
I miss.....so much!)  

There are times we just can't be here
to read the words of friends so dear
but one thing is understood perfectly clear
they are still held inside the heart so near.

I don't know what I would ever do
without the friends I've made, old and new
but you can always believe that this is true
when I can't be here, I sure get the blues.

That passion for words I can not resist
I need those words so eloquently kissed
they make me happy, sometimes cause a mist
at times it makes me mad, I clench my fist.

As long as passion for words inside me burns
back to this page I will I will always return
to read these words I so desperately  yearn
and by example I'll try to grow and learn.

At times I can only be a bystander from afar
but please be certain I will not par,
although time is limited, I'm never to far
to read the words of these shining stars!




On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

He said never judge a man
by the clothes that he wears
Don't take for granted
that he chose the cross that he bears
You can't put him down for who he is
or what he does
'Cause you don't dig
the holes that he dug.  
Tracey Lawrence



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-30-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-30 06:58 PM


I feel the same way. Your poem is lovely and made me feel connected somehow. Words are so special  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-11-30 11:43 PM


I enjoyed your poem very much. The wonderful thing about this place is that you can come and go..hang out or not..and you're always welcome home. That's the key word...home...
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
3 posted 2001-12-01 09:15 AM


Yes! The light is always on at Passions and I feel the same as I have limited time to dwell here. But it is always special and memorable. Just as you are. I appreciate the moments of growth and friendship in this wonderful place. Thank you ~somy.

Sincerely,
Regina

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-12-01 09:24 AM


Gentle Spirit,
A very gentle poem, enjoyed.

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-12-01 01:17 PM


My time is so limited now, but indeed you make me all feel as though it is always
ok to come home again, and for that.....
I thank you with all my heart.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Spine Grinder
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since 2000-10-28
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Standing In Silence...
6 posted 2001-12-01 04:33 PM


OMG!!! aunt donna this wuz AWESUM!!! ahhh i luved it! GREAT read, bye!

~If u luv something, let it go,if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz..~DMX

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
7 posted 2001-12-01 04:42 PM


Wonderful sentiment me friend and I think you've put words to what we all here feel, but somehow never say (can't find the words you know)...thanks my friend.

jwesley

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2001-12-01 05:05 PM


Donna, what a lovely and heartfelt write.  You ramble so well poetess.  
Yes...you can always come home to Passions.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
9 posted 2001-12-01 05:31 PM




Wonderful....

I loooooove your rambling dear.....keep it up  

A lovely expression for Passions and all its poets.....

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
10 posted 2001-12-01 07:14 PM


BRAVO!!! It's like you spoke the words from my own heart. I love it. You have put it perfectly. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2001-12-01 07:53 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Donna, we all understand, and we always love you so very much! (smiles) I too wish I could read everyones words every day, even while I'm busy with school too! (smiles) Your love shines in every word you write, and we always love you! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
12 posted 2001-12-01 09:03 PM


Gentle Spirit - you may ramble on with these words any time you like...

BC

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

13 posted 2001-12-02 04:23 PM


Ramble on poetess gentle...you speak well the words we all feel...
so little time...so much poetry...
and even when we do have extra time...theres just no way to read and reply to all the ones we wish too.
We are always glad to find your name here when you can come by.  

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
14 posted 2001-12-02 04:28 PM


Donna,
this is beautifuuly expressed and perfectly penned. I too feel like this about poetic connections.
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

15 posted 2001-12-03 07:12 AM


Again, my thanks to you all.  The feeling of friendship that is felt among all of those who share these pages is enough to make anyone feel like they are.....
Coming Home.  Thanks all, miss ya!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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