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Nature's Kiss.........Mark Bohannan's Challenge
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Nature's Kiss.........Mark Bohannan's Challenge |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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I thought I couldn't met the challenge as my muse was still asleep, but somehow she waked up and helped me to pen this one.  Nature's Kiss Let me embrace you gently Cover you with natural glee While I soothe you in my glory Rest and listen to nature's story Discover how a little breeze Whispers softly through top of trees Where birds echo her song To praise the Lord all day long See how squirrels play around While they hide acorns in the ground Murmurs lovely messages to the wind Glory to the Lord of Mankind Watch the majestic eagle in the sky Or the enchanting flight of a butterfly How their wings drift upon a breeze Flying in Creator's mild breath Bathe in the warmth of sunbeams Merge inside colorful dreams Inhale the beauty of sunset's bliss Enjoy God's love by nature's kiss 30/11/01 ~*TMP*~ ~*Theresia~* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh Charisma, this is sooooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Sunbeams of love fill all these gorgeous words! (sigh) His light and natures kiss shine gorgeously from your golden heart! I love it, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You have such a kind, loving heart for it is plain to see in these words. (I would suggest a plural verb in this stanza to go with the plural noun... Where birds echo their song Kathleen (Kay) |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Challenges bring out the best in some people....it certainly has in you! This is great |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Charisma this is a wonderful poetic response to the challenge Mark left on your other poem. Its imagery is as lovely as its inspirational message.... I told Mark about you posting it tonite when I talked to him and he hopes to be at a computer tomorrow. So you'll hear from him soon. Well done poetess he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Theresia- Now see there ... You haven't lost your muse!!! You just weren't listening to her as much as you should have been. You took the challenge and flew to the heaven's with it my friend. I knew you put together a treat for us and you did that with a touch grace and beauty as well. I just love nature poems and also inspirational ones ... You gave us both. Well done and I might add that you rhyme was perfect and the cadence and flow were superb. Thanks for indulging me. Big hugs to you my dear friend. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, Bathe in the warmth of sunbeams Merge inside colorful dreams Inhale the beauty of sunset's bliss Enjoy God's love by nature's kiss Ecellent *L* |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Charisma, This is glowing with beauty. You've done real good sweet lady. Love, RosePetal |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, nature as earth mother would kiss you for this, it's wonderful! Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Finally my server is working again, I'm sorry that I couldn't reply earlier as we had a big network problem this weekend, I couldn't log in till a few minutes ago. But well I am glad that they have solved the problem now and make it for me possible to be online Mistletoe Angel: thank you dear friend, so glad that you like it, and I am happy to share this one with you, may His sunbeams shine upon you my friend Irish Rose: thank you so much my dear, and I thank you for your suggestion, I think you are right, that way the sentence sounds better indeed Balladeer: thank you dear friend, glad you like it. Challenges are nice but soooooo hard to do, glad my muse came out to help me a bit Janet Marie:Thank you for your lovely response and I am truly happy that you like it too....and thank you for letting know Mark, and he is there right after you. ((hugs)) Mark: sooooo glad that you tickled my muse so I was able to wrote this one, you me dear friend may already know that nature is one of my favorite topics, doesn't it always suprise us with His beautiful views. It is always around us just for free and it can touch your heart, over and over again. Thank you for the challenge as it was such a pleasure to do  Seymour: thank you for the excellent my dear friend RosePetal: Thank you for your kind reply my dear Kethry: soooo good to see you here my dear friend, and happy to know that you like it too....((hugs)) |
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