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0 posted 2001-11-30 05:32 PM






The White Glove

Cannot you see it? That perfect, stark white glove
for opera,
she is pulling it on just now,
slowly,
with intent, onto her left hand.

Her right hand’s fingers caress lightly her left wrist,
slightly tugging,
gently easing
the glove up her silken arm,

then smoothing the gossamer-like cotton of the glove,
with her right hand, oblivious, ‘tho it is gloveless.

And the art of her is just like a portrait
unfinished



reposted, seasonal...hopefully, timeless...

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-30 05:40 PM




(smiles) Oohhhhhhhhhh, this is definitely a timeless classic to me! (smiles) I have been to the symphony a few times, and I always notice the orchestrator slip on the glove and hold his or her wand in hand. (smiles) It's so beautiful indeed! (sigh) Your poetry always is such a beautiful portrait in display! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-11-30 06:59 PM


Yes, I remember white gloves, the old fashioned kind that came up to the elbows?
I thought they were kind of sexy  

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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3 posted 2001-11-30 10:59 PM


It is indeed timeless Sunshine...the art of being a lady.......is always timeless.  Well done Lady.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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4 posted 2001-12-03 08:39 AM


When I read this poem, I thought of a Lady sitting at her dressing table, thinking about the evening ahead, and wondering where she left her other glove, and the hosiery, and  her favorite black slip, and her... well, you get the idea - lol.

Actually, I think this is a very sweet poem that shows an intimate view of a woman doing something that makes the world go around - being pure feminine.  Well done, Karilea!

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5 posted 2001-12-03 09:00 AM


Sunshine,
Lovely. *L*

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6 posted 2001-12-03 09:02 AM


Kari darling sister of my heart, it is utterly utterly wonderful. As I knew since you wrote it and you never write anything other than perfection. You have grown darling girl, absolutely splendiferous.

Utterly Fabulous

    
Love and warm stuff
as always
Puck
    
I really love this one darling girl it is perfect.  

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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7 posted 2001-12-03 10:01 AM


Excellent write as always.Showing something intimate of a woman.Good job.
Peaches

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8 posted 2001-12-03 10:09 AM


I like this a lot.

I can see the glove,
but what's more,
I can see the lady
Quite a woman!

Joe

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9 posted 2001-12-03 10:10 AM


And the art of her is just like a portrait
unfinished

.....

an impressive one, indeed... and timeless too...

regards to you, my friend,
sudhir

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10 posted 2001-12-03 10:30 AM


Beautiful.
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11 posted 2001-12-03 01:14 PM


Karilea--Makes me wish for a time when long minutes could be spent to dress.  Lovely write!
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