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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-11-30 03:19 PM


“A LOVER’S MESSAGE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I’ve thought many times it seems,
when my eyes are closed at night,
if happiness is only in dreams, then
disappears, into mornings light…

I know not where it goes,
perhaps hidden in my mind,
into the recesses of my shadows,
or in places where I’m blind…

It seems to flee without return,
slowly undoing loves door,
at times I feel myself burn,
for neither side can be, as before…

So I ask of you to hear my plea,
and know what I say is true,
don’t let happen what will be,
losing who became one, with you…
~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-11-30 03:24 PM


Its a sad truth that sometimes....well, "before" is no longer possible. You got me crying with this one, Bill.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
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2 posted 2001-11-30 05:26 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Bill, this is so so sad, and I know just how it feels to re-live a dream and be so happy when it feels it comes true, and be worried you may lose it forever! (sad sigh) You are such a loving, beautiful person and I have faith you will forever be one with your love! (sigh) We all love you, sweet friend, God Bless You, I cried throughout this whole poem! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-11-30 05:55 PM



Very tender...

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-30 11:03 PM


It's Friday night and I read a message from a heart the dreams love into reality..How I wish that it would become so for you, sweet man. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-30 11:08 PM


You deserve the truest love that the world has to offer! You are so kind and romantic...a true gentleman.

love,
RosePetal

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6 posted 2001-11-30 11:12 PM


I know this feeling well, Bill.  Good writing here.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-11-30 11:21 PM


Irish Rose - yes, it is very true that one can't go back the same as before. Truly sad, as I wonder...

Noah - you are one of the most kind, warm, compassionate persons that I have had the pleasure of meeting. I thank you from my heart for your very warm replies to my writings. I would be honored to call you my friend. Thank you...

Sunshine - my heart I believe makes it so...

Startime - yes it is Friday evening, and you know my heart. Fragile it is, with words of romance to write...

RosePetal - I'm touched by your caring words, and they make me smile. Thank you so much...


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