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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-30 02:51 PM



Embers,
which only moments ago
roared with fury,
now fade to glowing cinders,
as we are coupled
in an afterglow
of the whisper of your touch

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Abigaile
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since 2001-10-21
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1 posted 2001-11-30 03:22 PM


How sweetly beautiful! I love it.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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2 posted 2001-11-30 05:18 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful! (smiles) Every time I hear a whisper, I think of my sweet love singing to me! (smiles) I always love your beautiful words, you are soooooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

The Rusty Knight
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since 2001-08-29
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3 posted 2001-12-10 08:56 AM


quietly sensual.....Dan

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Duncan
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4 posted 2001-12-10 01:15 PM


Hoping soon you will return to fan the flame.  Beautifully quiet write of love.
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-12-10 02:12 PM


Sensually beautiful.  I love it!

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