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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-11-30 01:12 PM


When sunlight falls
You are in the whispers of dawn
Sunlight still awakes me each day
To a butterscotch sky

I have never been a stranger to love
I still remember First Love-first kiss
My memory still takes me back to Yesterday
Where love bloomed in a field of lilacs

It is a sentimental journey
I take back on the train of time
Where memories grow in shades of green

Looking across the table
Gazing into your eyes

I wonder...
                                            
How Long did it Take You to get that Ugly?

Did love blind me to your ugliness?

Were you a toad from the start?

Or did you sprout those warts

As you tried to jump away from my heart?


Mama always said that before I met my prince    
I would have to kiss a lot of toads

But she never told me

When at last I found my prince
He would change into a frog

Yet in spite of that
Together we still sit upon
On our lily pad
Remembering the past
Not forgetting the bakers' dozen children
We spawned in sweet memories past

They are a another leg
Upon this journey we began
So many years ago

So sweet toad of a husband
Your ugliness
I can handle

Your warts I'm sure
Have rubbed off on me

So don't tell ya
Sweet little old ugly Mama
"Get off the train of memories"
For love never jumped the tracks

The caboose
May be bringing up the rear                      But I'll keep my memory bag packed

I'll keep it scented
With thoughts of lily pad dreams
                                        
Until it's time for me to croak

                                                                                                      
                                                                                                        
                                                                                                                

                                                                                                            

                                                                                                            
                                                                                                          
                                                                                                        
                                                                                                    


                                                                                                            

                                                                                                      
                                                                                                        


                                                                                                        


                                                                                                          
                              

                                                                                                        

[This message has been edited by Songbird (edited 11-30-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-11-30 01:24 PM


SongBird~
My stars !
When you hop a train of thought ...
you take it by storm ! !

Wonderful ... and I've received your e-mail.
What fun this is going to be~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-11-30 01:32 PM


Oh my gosh!  This is great!  I didn't know the challenge was to include every one of those phrases!  Clarification please.
Good write....hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-11-30 01:34 PM



Very good!

Songbird
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4 posted 2001-11-30 01:49 PM


no need to use all of the phrases.   Thanks for the comments.
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