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Marge's challenge - Take me back to yesterday
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Marge's challenge - Take me back to yesterday |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Brilliant thoughts constantly flashing; Ideas, information always flaring; My consumed mind suddenly realising; Innocence has left me without caring... Now, I scream, take me back, Let me in to join the pack; Cute little thingys are in my backpack; Shiny pebbles and marbles with not a single crack!! I just want to hang out and have fun; Play in the mud and brown in the Sun; I need a chance again to run; Rapping and yapping, not knowing to pun... Surely, this is not my greed; I, for one, not just liking the speed; Oh, when is it going to be, I plead; No, please don't let my heart to bleed... Ah, now I know there's a day to succeed.. For, I'm just shaken off my slumberous weed!!!!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amigo~ Thank you for the inspired thoughts~ I really enjoyed this 'memory' .. 'Shiny pebbles and marbles with not a single crack!!' Stirred a memory of shooting marbles with my brother ! He even let me win ... sometimes~  Glad to have you participating~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Boy, Marge has really got the gray matter moving...enjoyed this! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this one, I do!! Marge sure has us thinking now! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is delightful. But I must have missed Marge's challenge along the way. Where? What? When? Link me up, Scotty, er...Marge. What challenge must I arise to? for? against? |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Margie dear....thank you for the inspiration...you brought up the memory of my brother sharing his prized possessions (sparingly though) with me...glad that u liked it.. Sunshine - isn't this fun?...i'm having a good time here...thank you Enchantress - thank you...happy to know u loved it... Midnitesun...thank you....by now, i guess you would have seen the reposting of challenge...waiting for your thoughts...good luck.. luv & peace, amigo [This message has been edited by amigo (edited 12-01-2001).] |
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