Marge's Challenge.....When Sunlight Falls

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Open Poetry #17

Marge's Challenge.....When Sunlight Falls

SEA

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with you

0 posted 2001-11-30 11:53 AM

Waning~
When Sunlight falls
Blanketing soft twilight
across our hearts as they entwine
welcoming the night with sweet tenderness
as we bid the sun good evening
rest until her return
in morning sky
~Waxing
~SEA~

* here is the link to her wonderful challenge

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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-30 11:55 AM

A KEEPER!

You knew I would love this one!

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-11-30 11:57 AM

SEA~
This is a BEAUTIFUL Rictameter~
WOW ... I'm sooooo happy to see your thoughts of inspire~

Go Girlie~
Just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

SEA

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with you

3 posted 2001-11-30 11:58 AM

thank you!

Happy you liked this oh Sun shiny one

SEA

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4 posted 2001-11-30 12:00 PM

thank you Marge for the inspire

PoetriPrincess
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5 posted 2001-11-30 12:20 PM

Very Lovely Post, Sea
I liked the way u shaped your words. %%

Beautiful visual Sunshine perfect for this piece.

Friends & Poems,
From Poetri Princess

[This message has been edited by PoetriPrincess (edited 11-30-2001).]

Auguste

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By the sea

6 posted 2001-11-30 01:30 PM

Just lovely, sweet friend.

(((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-11-30 02:02 PM

Lovely Susan...now I shall take a look at what this challenge is all about.
Beautiful piece here!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

8 posted 2001-11-30 02:55 PM

I tend to shy away from most challenges, thats when I get blocked, but you have done this beautifully.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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