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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-30 11:43 AM



Encircle Me
~*Marge Tindal*~

For I have wrapped you around
Around the shoulders of my soul
Soul of mating and soul elating
Elating everything I am
Am I loving you more
More than just a friend
Friend you encircle
Encircle and take me in~



*From the Poetry Workshop in Serpentine style
Thank you, Titia, for the inspiration~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 11-30-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-30 11:50 AM



Joining hands here....

PoetriPrincess
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2 posted 2001-11-30 12:55 PM


I want 2 b surrounded--oops Encircled 2
I could of read more.

Friends & Poems,
From Poetri Princess

SEA
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3 posted 2001-11-30 01:02 PM


oh Marge, this is lovely  
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-11-30 01:11 PM


Did I????

Just beautiful

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2001-11-30 01:24 PM


Marge,
It would be my pleasure. Kisses & Huggs *L*

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6 posted 2001-11-30 02:58 PM


beautiful expression

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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7 posted 2001-11-30 03:20 PM


Absolutley beautiful. *BIG SMILES*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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8 posted 2001-11-30 05:16 PM


wonderful treasure of friendship
offered with your golden heart
we are so lucky to know to have
in you a friend.

(((hugs))


~*Theresia~*

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9 posted 2001-12-02 07:36 PM


Lovely, Marge! Beautiful thoughts!
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10 posted 2001-12-02 07:40 PM


Marge,

you have such a soft heart.....your words are always a delight to read...lovely....  


Lauren~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 12-02-2001).]

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11 posted 2001-12-02 07:59 PM


Marge~I just love the way this is done!
Inspiring...sure is!  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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12 posted 2001-12-02 08:16 PM


Love this one Marge.  May I join in too?  
OLIAS
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13 posted 2001-12-02 11:07 PM


I liked this Marge, very much.

Regards,
Olias.

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14 posted 2001-12-02 11:11 PM


aha!!
i get it i get it i get it!!!
astounding.. ive written something like this before.. (but not as well, of course)

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15 posted 2001-12-02 11:17 PM




(sigh) Oh Marge, this is sooooooo creative and innovative, I love it!!! (smiles) I need to give this serpentine style a try sometime! (smiles) I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) Your beautiful words always amaze me! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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16 posted 2001-12-03 01:36 AM


Very nice Marge...James
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17 posted 2001-12-03 01:57 AM


Very inspirational Marge.I would love to be encircled by someone.
Peaches

Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2001-12-03 07:01 PM


Karilea~
Thank you ... I am pleased to hold your hand in friendship~

PoeticPrincess~
Thank you for the read and reply.
WELCOME to Passions~

SEA~
Thanks, hon~
I sure like this style a lot~

Titia~
YOU DID ~ ~
And I thank you~
I am just loving this Serpentine verse form~
*HUGS*

Seymour~
And mine also, dearest friend~

AWhispersCaress~
Thank you~

Abigaile~
Thank you very much~

Charisma~
You sweetheart you !
Thank you with a hug~

Denise~
Hugs, sweet lady~

GreenEyes~
I appreciate your sweet reply~

Enchantress~
Titia introdeuced me to the Serpentine style ...
and I'm sure liking it a lot~
Glad you do too !  Give it a try ?

Eloise~
Indeed you may~
With my pleasure dear lady~

OLIAS~
Thank you so much~

EagleScorpion~
Thanks so very much....
and ... is yours posted ????
If so ... send URL so I can read it ...
if not ... e-mail it to me~

Noah~
Thank you bunches~

JamesMichael~
Thanks ever so much~

Peaches~
I was inspired and lucky enough to be Encircled~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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19 posted 2001-12-04 06:19 PM


I like this very much.  I keep reading it over and over.  
Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2001-12-04 06:30 PM


MirrorMan~
Thank you so much~
I simply must do another of these Serpentine pieces ..
It wraps me around and brings me back to where I want to be ...
I am quite smitten with the style~
I appreciate that you enjoy it enough to read it more than once ~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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