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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2001-11-30 10:38 AM


~ First Attempt ~

fresh flower blossoms
as unfurled petals throw smiles
at whispers of dawn

~ Thanks, Marge ~

...others will follow, my friend...
...hope you enjoy...


Marge's challenge is here: /pip/Forum52/HTML/001099.html

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-30-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-30 10:42 AM


Sudhir lyer~   this is fantastic!! Challenge well met  
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2 posted 2001-11-30 10:44 AM


~How light and lovely are your words, carrying themselves on this morning's air. *Peace you.
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3 posted 2001-11-30 10:50 AM


Sudhir~
Thank you for participating~
I will look forward to seeing more from you~

*Keeping a folder for the entries ...
so please E-mail the URL*
Tee-Hee !

You're a charmer~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-11-30 10:53 AM



What a lovely write...I'm going to check out Marge's challenge...

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5 posted 2001-11-30 02:50 PM


Love this one Sudhir!
Marge's challenge well met!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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6 posted 2001-11-30 03:44 PM


Aha, now I understand all this challenging poetry business. Great job Sudhir.
I'm not feeling too well right now, and enjoy all these peaceful healing smiling poems. When my head stops imploding, I will join with you in some fun.

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7 posted 2001-11-30 08:34 PM


Well done, sudhir!!!!  
Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2001-12-03 02:12 AM


Thank you all, my friends...

This was fun... glad you enjoyed...

Have a great week ahead,
Regards,
Sudhir

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