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rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2001-11-30 06:34 AM

A thicket of brambles
stands between me
and my conveyance

I want to paint
the flickering film
in auburn warmth

The burly brush
wraps round my feet
in tangles of inquisition

assuming Rorschach
ink blot smears
for my words

I play the game
and say
“You know! It’s a butterfly”

When I know
It is Psyche
Held in Cupid’s arms
Dying for him
to release his arrow
Into her

I swallow hard
my perspective

The briars
want to scratch me open
even as they are gray
and brittle, tightly wound
and prudish

I allow my Psyche
to lay private
For the brambles
are only fit for snakes
and small timid creatures

And I shall paint
the lovers white this time
within the pantomime

sparing dead thorns
an early renewal
developing my film
in autumn’s secret

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-11-30 07:37 AM

This is a lovely metaphorical piece... and the future does indeed appear light and bright - Nicely done...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-11-30 08:54 AM

RWood~

'And I shall paint
the lovers white this time
within the pantomime'

What lovely thoughts fall within my reach~
Thank you - thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-30 08:59 AM

WOW!!! OH MY GOSH, YOU ALWAYS PAINT THE MOST GORGEOUS VISIONS!!! (smiles) I can see the silhouettes of Psyche painted in bright flickers of color! (smiles) Sooooooo enchanting! I love all your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

RSWells
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since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2001-11-30 09:01 AM

Very hopeful. Enjoyed

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-12-01 04:14 PM

Nan: Thank you very much for observing these thoughts. I hope so too! Hugs!

Marge: Many smiles. So glad you enoyed!

Noah: You see the most in me! I am forever grateful. Love and Hugs

Richard: Very hopeful indeed. Thank you!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-12-01 04:40 PM

Ahh yes. I am becoming a fan of your work, Lady. I love this!

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-01 04:45 PM

Another fan here Regina! Love your work!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2001-12-01 05:24 PM

Rwood,
I can fully agree with Nan this time. *L*

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-01 07:17 PM

You paint a vision of great beauty with these words. I too add my name to your growing list of fans. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-12-01 08:26 PM

I've always been a fan of your work. . .

and you wonder why. . . well done. . . this is poetry at its best. . . full of wonderful images and words that sing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

misguided angel
Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

11 posted 2001-12-01 08:47 PM

rwood, this is incredible. I have read and reread and see so much there.
Andrea

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

12 posted 2001-12-01 09:56 PM

My Goodness!!! What's a girl to do but sit here and be in awe of your warmth and kindness in reception to this piece. Thank you all so dearly for I am the one that is the fan...These pages offer me each of your spirit and you are so generous with it!!!! Many hugs, smiles and hopes to continue to read and experience each of your colors.

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

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