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Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-30 02:24 AM


Razor blade....of life

Such,

A thin sharp edge

To balance on

Hopes,

Split wide open

Please,

Watch your step

In to the future

Walking on eggs,

So much easier

Dodging so many evil bullets

Whew!,

Another very close shave

Another very long day

© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved

© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082
of Depression
1 posted 2001-11-30 09:47 AM


Such,
A thin sharp edge
To balance on.

Danger walk
Not so easily done
Hopes

Dreams
Split wide open

Gashed from the mind
Please
Watch your step

Watch any that you can find,
Caution
In to the future

From the past
Walking on eggs,

Shell cracking as you pass
So much easier
Dodging so many evil bullets

It’s not the bullets
But the evil from whom they’re sent
Whew!,

Another very close shave

hard to stay brave
Another very long day

along another dangerous way

Gloom
the spaces seemed to just ask for filling
least they ooze with more blood,
Hope you don't mind my filling



[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (edited 11-30-2001).]

Robert William Gruhn
Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168
California, USA
2 posted 2001-12-01 09:04 PM


No problem mr. gloom, would you mind if I did this with one of your pieces sometime?
Robert

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