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peaches73533
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0 posted 2001-11-29 11:43 PM


Ok this may make no sense but tried to do a fun one for me for a change.So here goes.


I was all depressed last night.
And the blues I had to fight.
For yesterday was my birthday.
No one even called me to just say hey.
I told myself just one year older.
As the night got even colder.
Today in the mail there was some cash.
To the bank I made a quick dash.
A sitter for the kids on Saturday.
As to the city I make my way.
To buy Christmas presents and things galore.
Shopping and shopping from store to store.
Looking at all of the wonderful things.
To put underneath the Christmas tree.
But as I shop throughout the mall.
I have one reason that tops it all.
A present for me will I buy.
And feel the glimmer in my eyes.
Pampering myself here and there.
Taking off some of the wear and tare.
Shopping, shopping I can't wait.
Shopping, shopping don't be late.
Who knows what treasures I'll find.
Maybe something to soothe the mind.
Hehehehehehehe I'm ready to go.
Let's get driving down that road.
For I hear the stores calling my name.
Saying please, please come my way.

Peaches

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2001-11-29 11:51 PM


You just go out and shop 'till you drop. In fact, I'll send you my list so I can stay inside and watch the blue pages scroll by. HAHAHA, I liked this funny one from you. Change can be good.  
peaches73533
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2 posted 2001-11-29 11:53 PM


Midnitesun: Thank you so much.I will do exactly that.Am fixing to get into some serious writing and thought I would do this one first.
Peaches

Balladeer
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3 posted 2001-11-29 11:59 PM


CHAAAAAAAAARGE IT!!!!!!!!  
Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-11-30 12:00 PM


peaches73533 - if it really was your birthday, then I say to you, "Happy Birthday". And I'll go shopping with you, I love to look in the stores...

BC

peaches73533
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5 posted 2001-11-30 12:01 PM


Balladeer: Right on.
Peaches

peaches73533
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6 posted 2001-11-30 12:04 PM


BillCharles: Get them shopping shoes on and let's go.
Peaches

EagleScorpion
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7 posted 2001-11-30 12:07 PM


uh oh! reminds me! still got a good deal of things to get! good grief

SpitFire
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8 posted 2001-11-30 12:25 PM


~Happy Birthday! And good for you! *Peace.
RosePetal
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9 posted 2001-11-30 12:46 PM


Hehehehhe happy late bday...and pamper yourself, we all need to do just that once in a while! : )
peaches73533
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10 posted 2001-11-30 01:43 AM


Spitfire: Thank you.

RosePetal: Thank you so much.You can tell from my elation I don't do it enough.

Peaches

Irish Rose
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11 posted 2001-11-30 10:20 AM


yes, by all means, be good to you!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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