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Robert William Gruhn
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0 posted 2001-11-29 07:15 PM


Living beyond my sorrow

Her courage,

Bringing strength

Her humility,

A lasting perspective

Her love,

An eternal comfort

Her hopes,

Now mine

Her laughter,

Still ringing clear

Her touch,

Never to be forgotten

Her spirit,

My inspiration

Her heart,

Joined forever with mine

Her mind,

Guiding this blind mortal to the doorway of Heaven



© Copyright 2001 Robert William Gruhn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-29 07:25 PM


The title caught my eye, as it's been a year of death and tears for me....I don't know if this is personal to YOU, but it certainly struck a chord with me, as my father's dying wish to me, was to "carry on, with dignity"--
the carrying on part? comes natural---grin, I'm working on the dignity!

I'm clicking this one into my library!
Thank you!

Denise
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2 posted 2001-12-01 09:15 PM


Very touching expression, Robert. Very well done.
Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-01 09:40 PM


And as you live you grace us with your words of passion and belief. **hugs** I am proud to call you friend, Sir Robert.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-12-01 09:45 PM


Sir Robert!  This piece is the best I have seen by you so far!
IMHO  Just terrific!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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5 posted 2001-12-01 09:54 PM




(smiles) Her love will rest eternally in you, sweet Robert, for you have a rare love that can never die and for that, you should not only cry in sorrow but also in joy to feel her love forever! (smiles) God Bless You,s weet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet brother, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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