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Love is Blind
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Love is Blind |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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She looked at him, with face upturned, through eyes that could not see Her smile reflected all the joys of what pure love should be Her fingers reached to touch his face, then from his lips, he asked: “How can it be that you love me, and how long will it last?” She thought for but a moment, then she touched him with a kiss A tear escaped her sightless eyes, she answered him like this: “I’ve loved you from the very start, and that can’t be denied... I felt the goodness in your soul, you touched me deep inside...” “You opened up my lifelong cage, to set my spirit free You gave me wings, and taught me that to fly, I need not see... You showed me that I only have to try, and nothing more And that I’ll find a brand new chance, behind each waiting door...” “But there are things that I do see, from eyes within my mind And never in my life, could I have dreamed that I would find A man with feelings, pure and true, a love to call my own You wrapped your life around me Now, at last, I have a home...” “I will ever stand by you, throughout our mortal days And I will always love you, for your gentle, tender ways It doesn’t matter what time does, of me you’ll have no doubt Though love is blind, I see you clearly, from the inside out...” ...you are me, I am you, we are one... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
wow this is pretty! I am happy that you have a love like that makes you this happy!!! They always say to keep your third eye open because love is blind and you arent! Good Write Sunnyone! RP [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Seems awhile since I've read one of your Sunnyone and glad am I to see one here - still just as wonderful as I remember them to be, if not even more so. jwesley |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
my goodness this goes right to the heart and touches sweetly and gently I love this |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is tender and beautiful. Peaches |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sunnyone, this is a delightful love poem. And I think you must really be enjoying this change. Hugs from the frozen one. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ RosePetal ~~~ Thank you so much for your nice thoughts, and I do appreciate them... ~~~ vandana ~~~ Yes, to enjoy is a rare opportunity in our very brief existence here on this plane... Thank you! ~~~ jwesley ~~~ Yes, I seem to have taken a bit of time off to get my new life in order, but one can never stop writing for long, if it is such a part of your soul......thank you, jw! ~~~ SEA ~~~ Thank you so much for reading and letting my feelings touch your heart, as that is what I hoped for...a soft touch for my friends... ~~~ Peaches ~~~ I am so glad that you enjoyed this, and hope to meet you again down the path! Thank you! ~~~ Midnitesun ~~~ Oh, my frozen friend, yes......I am very happy here without the snow and shovels, and with my English Prince! It is for him that this is written, as are all of my latest love stories! Thank you! ...you are me, I am you, we are one... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi Sunny, he must be one special prince, to bring about such happy writings. This is beautiful. Sandra |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There y'go.... |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
Sunnyone - this is so tender and loving....thank you, luv & peace, amigo |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Sandra, and yes....my Prince is my love song inspiration. So good to see you here!! Hi Sunshine......yes, I did go, about 9,000 miles to follow my dream......to be continued!! Hi amigo, and I am so glad to meet you, and just want to thank you for enjoying this little story!! ...you are me, I am you, we are one... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Hi Sunny Love is truly blind - and you were nervous about going to England. You are doing just fine and your beautiful words prove it. A |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
What a beautifual ode to love! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Ariana ~~~ Yes, I suffered from the same human quality that keeps most of us from experiencing new and wonderful things: fear of the unknown! But sometimes we must close our eyes and be blind to our fears, and reach for the 'happily ever after' ending!! Yes, it did turn out so very beautifully!! Thank you, big sis!!! ~~~ Domzi ~~~ And love is the favorite topic of most poets, as we draw from our inner selves, and our hearts! I am glad to meet you, and thank you much for reading and commenting on this piece!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hmmmmmm. you are in England now?..WOW twice, once for the move and the second for the most moving, lovely poem I have read in a very long while. If you have a secret, could you send it my way? *s It's nice to see you smiling. Maureen "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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