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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-11-29 02:50 PM


“THOUGHTS IN THE NIGHT”
                    by
                Bill Charles
                  ~~~~
I stand in night’s darkness
blending into the shadows,
as I gaze into the heavens
and then close my eyes…

They shut out the light of
stars shining above, but
even though I cannot see,
I’m still with desire with you…

It consumes me, penetrating
my being, and I sense the
soft evening breeze, your
delicate kisses that I know…

Lips sweeter than wine, moist,
touching, as lovers caress, I
see all of this in my mind, but now
only, my thoughts in the night…
                  ~~~~

© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2001-11-29 03:09 PM


Mmmm, such lovely thoughts in the night Bill.
Enjoying your romantic words so much!
Nice to have you back here....  ~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-29 05:07 PM


i like this...I have lots of thoughts like this too! : )
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3 posted 2001-11-29 05:55 PM


Now I see why Maureen likes you so much

Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2001-11-29 07:18 PM


yes, Interloper, Bill speaks Maureen's language of romance....and who hasn't gazed at the stars with longing for completeness?

Very Lovely, Bill....good to see ya!

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5 posted 2001-11-29 08:14 PM


"even though I cannot see,
I’m still with desire with you…"

Wow. That says so much, with so few words.


jwesley
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6 posted 2001-11-29 08:34 PM


Great Bill - afraid I'm definitely looking through your eyes.  But hey, at least you still have the memories - and those are worth a lot....I know.


jwesley

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-11-29 08:38 PM


Enchantress - it's nice to be back, as one thing it does is keeps me sane with everything going on in my life right now. Thanks for reading, thanks for the visit, and romance, a'hhhhhh, I love it....

RosePetal - your special, and thanks for your kind words. Many thoughts like these we all share...

Interloper - she is a special person, and I feel the same. Thanks for coming by...

serenity - the stars are the way to the heart, the eyes the way to the soul. Have both, and one has romance... And it's good to see you also...

Midnitesun - your words are kind, and telling, especially with these few words that I wrote. Thank you....



JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-11-29 11:01 PM


Good expression of your thoughts Bill...james
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9 posted 2001-11-29 11:05 PM


*sigh* Romantic thoughts here! Its wonderful to see you here again.  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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10 posted 2001-11-29 11:08 PM


I stand in night’s darkness
blending into the shadows,
as I gaze into the heavens
and then close my eyes"


I love this, so soft.....tender words here Bill....lovely...


Greeneyes~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-29-2001).]

peaches73533
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11 posted 2001-11-29 11:12 PM


I love this.Such romantic words.
Peaches

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2001-11-29 11:58 PM


JamesMichael - thank you for your reply to these words, it is always welcome....

Temptress - it is very good to be back posting my thoughts, and to read the replies, and how they might be touching someone...

Greeneyes - soft and tender are the words that come from my heart. Thank you for yours this night...

peaches73533 - thank you for reading this, and perhaps feeling what I did when I wrote it...

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