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Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 2001-11-29 01:29 PM

Lives are lived within the meantime
Awaiting moments to unfold
Dreams that push the youthfull foreward
Become the stories of the old
A risk is but itself when taken
Waiting too, leads to regret
I live my life within the meantime
Life - is life not happened yet

[This message has been edited by Kevin (edited 11-29-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-29 01:31 PM

For a young man, I see some infinite wisdom building....

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

2 posted 2001-11-29 01:32 PM

Life, is life not happened yet.

I absolutely love love love this line..
Excellent write my young friend.. bravo!

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-11-29 02:30 PM

Live in the present (meantime).
Plan for the future.
Learn from the past.

Wonderfully written

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2001-11-29 02:46 PM

Dreams that push the youthfull foreward
Become the stories of the old

Sometimes, that's exactly how I feel, like I'm collecting stories for tomorrow. Good one, Kevin.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-11-29 03:32 PM

This is excellent Kevin!
You write with a maturity far beyond your years.
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-11-30 10:59 PM

Wonderful Kevin. How true, life IS living in the meantime. We're always saying "tomorrow I will do this", but it is what we do today that counts. For we only have one today. We have thousands of tomorrows, but there is only ever one today. Love this piece.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

7 posted 2001-11-30 11:05 PM

One of the best....and truest...last lines I have ever seen. Nicely done, Kevin

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-30 11:15 PM

All we can ever hope to do is learn from the mistakes we make so that we do not repeat them in the future. Well done, Kevin.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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