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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-11-29 10:36 AM




This lighthouse, upon my silent shore
Has but one flaw, a blind spot
You, in cadence and time
Whisper of love
In rhythm and rhyme
Softly spoken to escape me
When I wake from dream
Aching with all I wish it could be
Mind reeling with one thought
Touch me….
No…
Not as departing lovers,
Is it in Everything I pen? I don’t think so

~SEA~

*thank you to Mistletoe Angel, RMW, Midnitesun, A Whisper’s Caress, Dgvarner, James Michael, and Daemonyin
for the inspiration found in their titles*


© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-11-29 10:49 AM



See which direction your Muse will take when she's good and ready!  All righty then!

SEA
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2 posted 2001-11-29 10:50 AM


she is all over the place right now.....it's storming here!   LOL
Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-11-29 10:51 AM


nicely done...

regards,
sudhir

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4 posted 2001-11-29 10:55 AM


WOW!!! I don't know how you did it but you sure did it. This is wonderful writing. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-29 12:08 PM


Excellent Susan...well done!  Enjoyed! hugs, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2001-11-29 12:12 PM


Such nice work, Susan, and it's storming there?  Hooray for you!    (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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Gaia
7 posted 2001-11-29 12:14 PM


Wow, that is really wonderful, SEA. Thanks for including one of mine    
Maybe I'll post a song title poem I wrote, though it's not terribly poetic, I might be forgiven. THANKS! Sea ya later.

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8 posted 2001-11-29 12:18 PM


Very cool write, SEA!
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9 posted 2001-11-30 09:44 AM


SEA~
Delightfully penned~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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10 posted 2001-11-30 09:49 AM


Very creative and lovely.
Sandra

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11 posted 2001-12-01 09:33 AM


This is really wonderful. I love the way you put them seamlessly together. Bravo!

Sincerely,
Regina

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12 posted 2001-12-01 12:05 PM


How cute!! But...none of my poem titles were included in here : (  Im just playing sweetie! Good Work.
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13 posted 2001-12-01 12:38 PM


You did this very good. Thank you for sharing it.
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14 posted 2001-12-01 01:00 PM


This guy happens to believe that love is felt softly through a touch...James
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15 posted 2001-12-01 01:29 PM




BRAVO!!! I love it!!! (smiles) I'm so happy my title can inspire part of such a lovely poem! (big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Susan, I love it!!! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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16 posted 2001-12-02 06:08 PM


enjoy
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
17 posted 2001-12-02 06:11 PM




Lovely... and lovely inspiration as well.

I enjoyed it

Thank you
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