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Departing Lovers
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Departing Lovers |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Departing Lovers You don't have to tell me the reason why you went away. Departing lovers never give the real reasons anyway. It's kind of obvious that if you truly loved me you would love to stay and I would never have to say... "The saddest part of parting is that I can no longer tell you that I love you each new day." JamesLee November29 2001 |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
what a great way of writing sentiments in words... Regards to you James, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned, you always translate your feelings so well.....excellent as always my friend! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ahh James, this is so sad If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh, James, I am so very sorry. This poem brought tears to my eyes. You pain and loss is so clear. **big hugs**  I know words cannot help much but my heart goes out to you, sweet man. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: ain't it the truth... geezzzz thank you for this.... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
It's kind of obvious that if you truly loved me you would love to stay oh James.......... this brought forth a deep sigh Hugs2uSweetie *~coco~* |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Wow, that was wonderful. I know that feeling. *Tears* That brought back some thoughts. This is one of the best release poems that I have read in a long time. Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
"Departing lovers never give the real reasons anyway." --That's so true! They might as well be honest since they are going to break our heart anyway! "It's kind of obvious that if you truly loved me you would love to stay"--awww james, im sorry,((hugs)) |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
This is truly beautiful. I disagree though, I feel that sometimes true lovers may part, but they will always return. That is what makes their love true. *SMILE* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sadly beautiful my friend. You do these well. I look forward to the happy times for you  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - yes, you do these very well. Very well indeed... BC |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love will come once more, Great poem. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Sad topic...but a great cluster of words. Thanks for the read! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
separations drear leaving behind emptiness heave in life's shadows this never will have an end till final separation WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. |
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