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Tonight, Love...
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Tonight, Love... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*Tonight, Love...*~ Tonight, Love... hold me close Embrace this tender, fragile heart Tonight, Love... kiss me soft Breathe warmth upon this tear-stained cheek Tonight, Love touch me sweet Whisper the promise of forever Until tonight, Love... ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
How beautiful Vicky. I hope this forever kiss is yours tonight. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed this one..very soft and romantic...James |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
this one clings to me..says, "take me home, take me home.."  this could be taken as "love" being a 'pet name'..or "love" being 'love'...hmm..i like it both ways..  great write tricks good to see you, btw! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
so fragile penned, so touching, so wonderfully done.....love it. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I couldn't sleep last night, and came down and switched the computer on. You don't know how much this one spoke to my mood and feelings at the time. So simply put, but so much emotion in this one, I love it Vicky If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Vicky~ How beautifully inspired is this thoughtful piece. You know you write my little heart ... perhaps better than I can do~ Big hugs for such beauty~ I love you, little buddy~  ((((Huggies)))) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
so so soft and lovely....*sigh* it's gorgeous Vicky! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Soft and dreamy...just the way I love them. *sigh* this will be a poem I will remember tonight when I need to dream my fantasies. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Vicky, wonderful piece. a time we all look forward to... Well until tonight love.... Parker |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Tonight, Love touch me sweet Whisper the promise of forever Until tonight, Love... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wow Vicky! What a beauty this poem is! Hugs, Deb |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I was wondering where you got off too... now I see you been "distracted" A lovely whispered romantic verse Poetess Vicky... Congrats on 3000 too  good to see you and read you again. Hows the craft biz coming along?? do ya need some xmas elves to help you he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Just perfect. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Leaves me tongue-tyed it does. Beautiful write V. jwesley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Just my luck! You posted this yesterday, I read it today...and missed last night!! Dogonnit, next time e-mail me, ok??? I love it... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Midnitesun- Thank you...glad you enjoyed this. James Michael- Happy you enjoyed it, my friend. dg- Hmmmmmm..a 'clingy' poem, huh? LOL! Glad you like this one. Now...if only it would come true...LOL. Love and hugs to you.. Charisma- Makes me smile just to see your name here. Thanks so much, sweet friend..glad you like it. Tracey- I'm so happy to know that this touched you. Thanks so much for the kind reply. Marge- You know exactly what the inspiration was for this, and I'm soooo happy to know you like it. As for me writing your heart...I'll take that as a HUGE compliment...but I don't know that I write it better than YOU.  Love you bunches, sweet buddy, SEA- Thanks so much, my friend. Glad you enjoyed it. Startime- Glad you found this 'dreamy'.. Thanks so much for the kind reply...sweet dreams. Parker- Well, hello there...so good to see your name here. Really glad you enjoyed this. Until tonight, Love... Deb- Thanks so much, sweet friend. Your replies always make me smile. Vandana- Thank you, my friend. Janet Marie- Thanks for missing me.. Unfortunately, MY distraction wasn't NEARLY as enjoyable as the poem would suggest. LOL My muse has taken an extended vacation, and it's just now trying to come back...wish me luck. Thanks so much for the kind reply, my friend. Really glad you enjoyed the poem. As for the 'craft biz'..LOL...VERY slow going. Perhaps I SHOULD get some elves to help me..LOL. Hugs to you. Walker- Thanks so much! jwesley- What a compliment...thank you. Balladeer- I waited for you...but you never showed up.  What can I say...you missed out on a wonderful night. Until tonight, Love...  Hugs to all, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-30-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I just have to send this beauty around again~ AND ... you know even more now ... how'd you know that ??? Bill says ... 'Thank you, Vicky. You wrote two hearts in this one ... it's foreverly.' *Loving to share our joy with you sweet, sweet friend~ I love ya' ... and he has to ... it's a package deal ! *Hugs* ~*Me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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crazy4u Member
since 2001-10-28
Posts 67 |
Where are you love? Im waiting for you tonight? Stirred up some emotions over here <~~~ Loved the poem xoxo |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahhh there you are again, almost thought I lost you and now I'm rather late, glad I found you though For you wrote a beautiful peace again. So glad to see you posting again. TitiaA rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Vic Sweetness, I absolutely love this poem! luv ya Tanya |
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The Rusty Knight Member
since 2001-08-29
Posts 414Texas |
This is one of those rare poems that is from the heart to the heart. Dan Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream. |
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