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Everything pen? I don't think so.
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Everything pen? I don't think so. |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
Generic on paper thoughts as flies innumerable quick penned netted tries many lost truths indistinguishable honesty So do I have to be a liar to write inspired poetry? too many flies they all look the same chaotic tries half-baked in center flame But, is this wrong? For as long as the flame is flaming; Burns my thoughts in writing ...I should cease all my complaining, and with poetry begin fighting. But even now the flies escape, which hinders a very peaceful shape, to every one poem that I make. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well I can say one thing...that your poetry is unique and made me stop and think while I read it a second time. Inspiration takes so many different forms that each poet has their own that they write from. Welcome to Passions. You will find the poets here are extremely talented and very loving to all who join our little family. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to passions, Daemonyin. Let those flies loose to land where they will they'll help you find the end of your quill and then the words will really fly across these blue pages |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: nothing could ever be ever be wrong with a heart so open to the song of self revealing, beauty spent in sharing thoughts in lines you've lent to us to read they're yours you know! with all all share we all will grow! --------------- thank you!!! loved your lyical verse which was emotive and seemed straight from the heart.... i love to feel sincerity in poetry... and i felt it in yours.... Very nicely done with the expressiveness and phrasing of a human poet.... hurts, questions, truths, all portrayed with honesty... i love it!! Welcome to the blue pages.... i will look forward to reading more of you!!!  [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 11-29-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I enjoyed this...and I smile as I sympathize with the struggle. Welcome to passions...as to writing? I just try to keep my head down and keep typing! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions, and I truly enjoyed your entrance.....hope to see many more! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Generic? I think not - Your work appears to be a far cry from such a common lot.... Welcome to Passions - This is a wonderful place where you can settle in and make yourself quite comfy... Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
..."As long as the flame is flamin'!" Got that write! Welcome to Passions! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thought provoking first post! I look forward to seeing more of your writing! ~NancyLee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Daemonyin, Welcome and all I can say is, Nothings perfect. Good write. |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Oh yes, I know the feeling, but out of the chaos of word-flies the swarm takes form and meaning and often quite unexpectedly beautiful. Your feeling and meaning are quite clear in truth. Welcome to Passions! Joe Lamando |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Wow, I don't know what to say. I guess that I should start with: Welcome to Passions!!!! Then I have to say that I'm with Startime, I had to read it, stop, think and then read it again. That was just wonderful. Sit down, relax, take your shoes, and enjoy your stay!!!! Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
Startime, extremely talented indeed. Never have I been in such a place where so much great poetry rushes in so quickly, and so frequently... It's like swimming in an ocean of genius; I hope to at least stay afloat. Thank you all for your sentiment, and your welcomes, I appreciate it and I must say, was all quite unexpected. I was somewhat nervous, but hey I feel much better now. Thanks |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Its like the first time you try to fly ... its a bit nerve-racking, a bit scarey ... but once you feel the wind under you, theres no turning back!!! Welcome, follow your flame and let the flies settle as they may. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Does one need to be a liar to write inspired poetry? Not at all..one simply needs a knowledge of life and a good imagination and the ability to see beyond what others may. Every day here I see poems from people on subjects I would have never even considered writing poetry about....and yet the poem was there to be written and they saw it. That is the beauty - and the never-ending satisfaction of poetry. If this poem is any indication of your abilities, You needn't worry. You are indeed a poet, sir, and I welcome you |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Well, you have made quite the entrance to passions with this one. I have read it a couple of times....it is quite wonderful. Welcome and I hope we see more from you before long If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Whether this was lies or not it was perfectly pitched. Welcome and write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Get used to it, I'm always late with my replies  Still I want to say Welcome to you and your refreshing poetry Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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