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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-11-28 11:41 PM



Soft Reminders

This night I soak in thoughts of you
warmth overriding the fears of the morn,
mind no longer pushing buttons,
no longer doubting the truth of  words.

This imprisoned heart, needs no pardon,
holds custody of only one,
having tasted your lips of love.
Lying back, your shadow
guards me, towering over me.
I feel the mystery of you joining me in float,
your lore, too tempting at times,
causing a rise in temperature.

I labor in thought,
droplets trickling down my forehead,
working myself up into a lather over you.
I take you in eagerly,
immersed in the awe of you, knowing
that I will bathe in you
with forever thoughts this night,
and come morn,
will feel the cleansing of a new day...
and soft reminders of you, once again.

~Wynter

A welcome back to a very romantic poet...we missed you BC....you bring out the romance in my words.*s


"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-28-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-28 11:51 PM


STANDING OVATION!!!!OH BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!!He will be thrilled by this sensually romantic poem. Perfectly suited to him and woven by the pen of a master. BRAVO!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2001-11-29 02:44 PM


nakdthoughts - you are a master at romantic writings. I love it, and I thank you from the soft spots in my heart. Made my day... This really should have at least a few replies...

BC

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2001-11-29 02:47 PM


What a wonderful poem, and a good tribute to a wonderful poetic friend.  I'll echo those thoughts, Maureen. Glad to have Bill back in here again.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-11-29 03:01 PM


Yes!  Good write Maureen, and we are all glad to have our romantic writer back home with us!  Good one!  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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5 posted 2001-11-29 04:04 PM


Wow.  Now that is magnificent Maureen.  I love your positve and romantic side  

Hooray for you, BC.  You have performed an excellent feat!


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-29-2001).]

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-12-01 06:46 AM


thank you all..I am glad my words brought a smile to anyone's face.

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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