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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-28 06:51 PM



Balancing on feet, weary
The struggle to move, not easy
Time is, moments so fragile
Gusts of misery, so futile

Forward into the storm of tomorrow
The walk begins in search of no sorrow
Time is, realities of solitude's shadow
Tempests of questions, answers so shallow

Years of torment come to rest
Feeling the breeze on the hill's crest
Time is, sitting by the riverside of life
Winds of change nearby to hold and survive

There is a field of love to be found
In the mirrors of pain's silent sound
Time is, humility and restraint from anger
Blowing in new winds to last forever

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2001-11-28 06:56 PM


*sigh*
"There is a field of love to be found
In the mirrors of pain's silent sound
Time is, humility and restraint from anger
Blowing in new winds to last forever "

These words are the perfect ending as hope comes with the new winds. Beautiful. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2001-11-28 06:58 PM


As we settle back to rejoice in the knowledge that the winds will indeed blow fresh opportunities our way we will be reminded of this wonderful creation of yours.  Very enjoyable read and so full of truth.  I like the way your words fall easily when read aloud.  Very good read for sure.
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-11-28 06:58 PM


Yes, Daniel, the winds of change are sometimes very brutal.
You have touched me through your poetry and your friendship.
Thank you for this one.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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