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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-11-28 05:55 PM



Whisper...

across the night,
so that I may be blanketed
in the poetry of your desire....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-28 06:05 PM


Incredible. Such a great little whisper!
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-11-28 06:38 PM


for your ears alone
I whisper words of desire
carried on the wind

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-11-29 01:26 AM



Speak clearly
even loudly
so that I may be sure
not to miss the intent
of your whisper

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lost in blue pages
4 posted 2001-11-29 06:18 AM


Beautifully done!
Startime
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5 posted 2001-11-29 10:08 AM


*sigh* a whisper filled with passions of desire. Very well done. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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6 posted 2001-11-29 11:56 AM


That was wonderfully short and sweet.  Such a warm thought that I will take with me for the rest day.

Love,
Ladycat

Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.


A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
7 posted 2001-11-30 03:02 PM


allow me to humbly curtsie before this great review....

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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