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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-11-28 01:54 PM



      “SWEETER THAN THAT”
                      by
                  Bill Charles
                     ~~~~
I wrote a poem, about kisses sweet
just a short time ago…
Posted it, and some replied with
a hug, and a kiss, also…

It was about the tenderness of lips,
and how softly they touched mine…
The contentment they gave me,
how my being, started to realign…

All of the replies touched me deeply,
friends writing about another’s poem…
Made me feel really special,
and I felt, as if I was back home…

So I just wanted you all to know
how I felt, about what was said…
The contentment you gave me within,
that night, when I went to bed…
                    ~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-28 02:05 PM


**big hugs***You know what, Bill? I think you are just a sweetheart and you write the most wonderfully romantic poetry. Here is an extra special kiss for an extra special man.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA
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2 posted 2001-11-28 02:07 PM


your poems are always lovely. This is very nice  
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2001-11-28 02:22 PM


you ARE at home...mr romance...helen
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4 posted 2001-11-28 02:44 PM


Bill, you are such a gentle man truly you are a dear friend...
MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (on cheekz) teehee
I just luv those sweet poemz cuz everybody knows how much I luvvvvvvvvvvvv sweets well chocolate actually!

*~coco~*

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5 posted 2001-11-28 03:23 PM


Bill,

I love reading your poetry, it always brings a smile to my face!
Keep the romance coming!

RP

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6 posted 2001-11-28 04:05 PM


Me too adore your poetry a lot    

and this one is really sweet  

(((Hugs)))

~*Theresia~*

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2001-11-28 07:47 PM


Startime - thank you for thinking that I'm a sweetheart. I also try to do the right thing, but we're not perfect. And as you know, I love to write about romance and love. What else can make one feel like they're cared for? And a kiss, to you.

SEA - thanks for the reply, and nice to see you.

1slick_lady - appreciate the words of being at home. And of your stopping to read this.

CocoBaci - I do my best to be gentle to others, but at times the gentleness is not returned, as I have found out recently. And you are also a dear friend. By the way, I just loves chocolate....

RosePetal - thank you for your thoughts, and I'm glad a smile comes to your face when you read what I write... I may stop someday, but the romance never will...

Charisma - and me adore your replies, thank you...



Ariana
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8 posted 2001-11-28 09:21 PM


BC

It is obvious you have made many friends who enjoy your poems.  Think of just how lucky you are and how much enjoyment friendship can bring.
A

Enchantress
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9 posted 2001-11-28 09:28 PM


Big kisses to you Bill!
We all love your romantic writing and thank you for sharing it with us!
~hugs and a smooch, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sven
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10 posted 2001-11-28 09:43 PM


thanks for sharing that with us BC. . . it's good to see that we can bring you as much contentment as you bring us. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

BloomingRose
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11 posted 2001-11-28 10:02 PM


Here's a hug for a very sweet man.
**HUGS**

Deb

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2001-11-28 10:50 PM


Ariana - It is nice to see that 'SOME' enjoy what I write and are friends through my writings.

Enchantress - and a big one to you, from me.
Thank you for your words, I do appreciate them every time you reply..

Sven - my friend, whom I have learned through your writings that you have many of the same feelings as I. thank you...

BloomingRose - thank you, and here is one for you *hug*

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