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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-11-28 10:26 AM




End of dreamy times
splashed upon tears of oceans
lonely star of sea


Charisma
~*TMP*~


~*Theresia~*

[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-28-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-11-28 10:32 AM


Beautiful Haiku

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2001-11-28 10:34 AM


Beautifully said and perfectly displayed...interesting how all of us will be able to relate to this. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-11-28 10:50 AM


Charisma~
This is awesome !
Nobody does it better !

Tee-Hee ... I swiped-a-graphic~

Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-11-28 11:00 AM


yep, this is beautiful, but then, I'm sure you knew I'd love it  
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5 posted 2001-11-28 11:03 AM


Beautiful indeed! Charisma, where have you been? I have missed you and your poetry.

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6 posted 2001-11-28 12:08 PM


shines still in the night
sending rays of love to sea
remember, my love

  sorry, just came out. . . wonderful my friend. . . you indeed have been missed. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-11-28 12:14 PM


AWWWWWWW charisma this is soooooooooooooooo beautiful   i just luv it when you write these haikus...

muaah on cheeks2uSweetie
*~coco~*

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-28-2001).]

Charisma
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8 posted 2001-11-28 04:46 PM


Interloper: Thank you dear friend  

Startime: Thank you my friend ((hugs))  

Marge: Thank you Marge, I am truly glad that you like it  ((Hugs))  

Sea: Glad to know that you like it Sea  

RosePetal: Thank you for the beautiful, and I think that I lost my muse somewhere that's why I didn't post much lately  

Sven: awwwwwwwwwww.....that is a sweet reply, and you knew that I would love it   ((Hugs))

CoCo: I'm sooooooooo glad that you like it, and *wow* I love these warm reply.....thank you dear friend  


Mark Bohannan
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9 posted 2001-11-28 06:54 PM


It's about time I saw your name in here posting a new one for us.  Okay, so I admit it, I haven't been around much myself but hey......we all have our favorites and you my dear friend are definitely one.  What a beautiful Haiku and the graphic is perfect for it.  Now let's see you post a four line / 5 verse / treasure ( in rhyme of course ) for our hungry eyes.  Yes, it is a challenge but I am allowed you know.  Nice to see you here.
Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-11-28 07:56 PM


WOW Charisma, glad you did post one of your suberb haikus again.

Just beautiful

Titia

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Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace/http://comm

Charisma
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11 posted 2001-11-29 05:24 AM


Mark: autsjjjjjjjjjjjj Mark, a challenge from you   oh my, think I must find my muse first, haven't you seen her lately maybe???
if so, please send her back so I can work to met this challenge....but well, maybe I can toss you an apple to ease your hungry a bit  
And soooooooo good to see you too my dear friend, 'cause your comments are always appreciated by me, and you know that right  

Titia: I am happy to know that you like my haikus, thank you dear friend  

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