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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-11-28 10:02 AM



Seeker I Am
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Seeker I am
So I asked the moon
just one question tonight
How much will he love me
on the dawn's early light
She smiled in surrender
with gentle of glow
Seeker I am~

~*~

~Seeker I am
I'm needing to know
for if breaking of dawn
brings happiness flowing
then on to the morning
I wish to be going
Seeker is me~

~*~

Seeker I~
She gave a wink
Said, you will know
love in full-measure
in constant of glow
Satiated seeker
Now I sigh~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-11-28 10:06 AM


Marge, this is fantastic...I love how you do what you do  
Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-11-28 10:16 AM


Pretty Marge
Pretty Poetry

Pretty Really Pretty
Pretty, Just Like The Moon

Pretty Poetry
Pretty Marge

regards, my friend
sudhir

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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-11-28 10:21 AM


we will all be sighing with this one....

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2001-11-28 10:21 AM


POETESS OF GRACE ... YOU "AM"...
and just look at you...all aglow  
Ahh we love ya when youre Luna inspired *wink*

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

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5 posted 2001-11-28 10:27 AM


satiated sigh
the sound of love fulfilling
awaiting next time

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-28 10:30 AM


STANDING OVATION!!!Oh gosh, Marge, this is absolutely wonderful in form and word. I love it!! I love it!!! **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2001-11-28 10:44 AM


Friends ALL~
You make it such fun to share poetry~
I thank you from the heart of my little bottom~

SEA~
Thank you ... always~

Sudhir~
What a lovely, lovely reply~
Thank you from this lady's heart~

AWhispersCaress~
*Sighs* are a good thing ... thank you so much~

JanetMarie~
Awwwwww !  Thank you dearest girlie~

LunaTic~ ... this one has your name on it~
You prod me to do my best to write your realm~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2001-11-29 10:01 PM



Marge-
   Ah...and now, I sigh with you..
   This is gorgeous as always, lady luna.
   Nobody hangs the moon like you do.
   Absolutely loving it.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2001-11-29 10:14 PM


Ah Marge ... no one composes in this style as beautifully as you my friend. Your lovely presentation compliments the wonderful sentiments woven throughout. Very much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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Canada eh.
10 posted 2001-11-29 10:26 PM


Oh Marge....ya gotta love it!  AND you too!
~hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Martie
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11 posted 2001-11-29 10:30 PM


Marge--I believe that whatever you seek, you will find..cause that's the kind you are.  Love, from the moon and me.
Songbird
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12 posted 2001-11-29 10:38 PM


You know what happens to people who keep staring at the moon.. they sometime go  _ooney.. I am kidding of course. I love the moon too and your verses.
Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-11-29 10:40 PM


Vicky~
Tee-Hee !  YOU MADE ME DO IT !
I love you to pieces gal~


Kit~
Thank you so very, very much.
I really have a hankering for the Luna-filled nights~

Enchantress~
Awwwww ... you make me glow~
Thank you~

LittleLunaSis~
You delight me with the friendship of you~
I love you~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2001-11-29 10:41 PM


SongBird~
LOL ... I fess up ... been THERE a loooooong time~
Tee-Hee !  Thanks, gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com                

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