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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Crimson Crinolines ~*Marge Tindal*~  Ruffles on morning crinolines Prance across a vanilla sky Flirting of crimson skirting Catches sailor's eye Oh, what a sextant vision Where horizon meets the sea Measured in pinkest pleasure Gaze of pleasantry Disappearing in a blink ~ Pink, you think ? Guess again … She changes crinolines on a whim ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is wonderful... Regards to you, Marge, Sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You do the sky justice Simply beautiful Liz |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, this is gorgeous  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your work is extant it deserves highest acclaim beautiful image Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OH my how incredibly beautiful. I never would have been able to come up with the words to discribe such a scene as this but you have done it perfectly. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I still say a white flame from the eternal blood is hotter!!!  ( oooops, wrong poem!!! ) Let's see ... where are we??? Oh yeah!! PINK is the color of the day but hey ... Vanilla is "WHITE" ain't it?  Anyway ... I do so love it when you bring us your wonderful wit mixed with your freshness of uniqueness all rolled up in a beautiful treat that only you can provide us. I always enjoy learning from you and the vision you always capture so well. Many hugs and of course... ge gv yuhi!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You did it again dear giving me a smile before hitting the sack  How can I not love your poems Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Unique is you..and I'm so glad. This is wonderful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling!  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this lots, Marge. Very catchy, with beautiful words, and the ending just wrapped it up sweetly. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Marge! This is wonderful....lovely write and oh so pretty in pink! hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
What beautiful vision you have!  Deb |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. I enjoy reading your poems. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh how I love thos changing crinolines! This is a delightful fun poem. PS I'm glad 'Loper said extant, not extinct! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is this a flirt under your skirt??? Me thinks ya are tickled pink A certain cowboy said I had to read this... I thought Crinolines was a pastry ROFL oh well...either way tis a beauty of a poem love that pic too and the poet  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyDearPoetFriends~ You all make it such fun to share the joys of my pen~ God has painted the most lovely of skies for me to share~ Thank you all for letting me do just that~ Love n' hugs~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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