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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost: It Starts With The crunch of gravel. The back and withdraw. The purr of the motor. The close of the door. The tone of the turn. The beam of the lights. The moan of the wind. The closure of night. The weight of boredom. The blues and the mews. The touching of sleep. The fight and refuse. The weary dreary. The length of the track. The humbling truth. Without a way back. The ending of dawn The rebirth of morn. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
IT STARTS WITH a good morning smile  regards to you, Seymour, my friend, Sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Your smile is my smile. Thank you my friend. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a wonderful metaphor, to hear night crunching along the gravel, leaving way for dawn... ah, this picture likes Sun very, very much! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Sy, you have doe it again. Well done my friend Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ A joy to share this morning with you~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When your pen is driving...we are all along for a ride down WAAAY COOOL Avenue  and Im with Sun...very clever metaphor in this Stinky Get on your "bad motorscooter and ride" *L* Rev up Randy and rhyme   me he said ... "dont cry" ... said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time." ~Tabitha's Secret~ [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
And how does it end, Sy? With an ache in the back A favorite chair Knowing that you will always be there A late supper, a movie you don't want to miss A heart full of laughter A hug and a kiss And another post by you Thank you for this wake up call LIz [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and it ends with my thanks Sir. . . for reposting. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Someday I want it to start with a good morning kiss and much more to follow Wonderful writing as always, sweet man. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L* Lunatic, Thank you for the well done. Marge, My pleasure. K's and H's *L* JM, Rhyming you is my pleasure. WW R S Elizabeth, Sweet poetist, the answer seems to be statis-quo. *L* Sven, Your thanks is my thanks. Startime, I'll see what I can do. *L* |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Oh, the weight and the weary, the lenght and the ending . . . It felt like a long night, sir. The monotony. |
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Streen Member
since 2001-11-28
Posts 169 |
Very nice; melikes. -Streen |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad, It was and thanks for the read. Steen, Thanks for the like. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I've read this several times and get many different meanings with each. I like poetry that allows me to ponder. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I know there was more there..but thanks for letting us imagine. Very visual and charging...full speed ahead? Or would you rather it slow down? Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan, Your pleasure is my pleasure. Rwood, What ever pleases the reader. *L* |
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