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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-11-28 07:37 AM



Your kisses
are like
liquid love
They fill me
with all I need to know
When we kiss
I'm renewed
And my heart's content
as long as you
kiss me
at least once
a day


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2001-11-28 07:50 AM


sounds great!

regards,
sudhir

Duncan
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2 posted 2001-11-28 10:17 AM


Once a day...yeah, sure!
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-11-28 10:19 AM


only once a day????

I am like a little kid.....
more, more, more.....

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-11-28 10:33 AM


At least
Very nice work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RosePetal
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5 posted 2001-11-28 11:12 AM


mmm liquid love! 1 kiss..2 kiss...3 kiss 4
Content for few mins then I want some more hehe

Startime
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6 posted 2001-11-28 11:14 AM


*sigh* and you melt into his arms as he is kissing you with all the love of his heart and charms. BRAVO!!!!Never settle for less than at least 5 kisses a day.   **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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7 posted 2001-11-28 12:03 PM


A kiss a day keeps the bad times away???  

well done walker. . . again, I love the way you say so much with so little. . .

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