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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-11-28 06:36 AM

Framed Complete

I am easily molded,
yielding to your softness,
subdued in color,
awaiting the palettes touch.
I lack the strength
to refute the brilliance
of your glare,
so intense the feel,
you blind my heart
from stationary beat.

I am neither subtle
in my approach,
nor discriminating
in my passion,
for all things
brush the surface
of my mind,
removing the tarnish
of the past, refining,
freeing me of impurities,
bringing me to an elegance
of design.

I am gilded in your presence,
embellished by your touch,
sweetened by your kiss,
coated by your words,
that instill a discipline,
to the art of me.
Each stroke,
brings me closer
to restoration,
until I am framed complete,
just for you.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-11-28 07:00 AM

Wynter,

your choice of words is extraordinary....
"until I am framed complete,
just for you."

regards to you,
Sudhir

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2001-11-28 06:58 PM

And what a picture you will be.
A masterpiece rivaled only by Monet

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-11-28 06:59 PM

Yes, I feel this way many times. I love the ending to this one

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-11-28 07:10 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Maureen! (smiles) May your sweet memories and love forever be framed eternally and cherished dear forever! (smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-11-28 07:33 PM

So romantic abd beautiful.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-11-28 07:38 PM

Simply beautiful Maureen!
Well done as usual in your own personal style of beauty.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

7 posted 2001-11-28 07:56 PM

Your words always paint the perfect picture and leave me in awe of how they feel as I read them. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-11-28 07:57 PM

nakdthoughts - your writings at times has a strange effect on me, because they are so, well just so romantic, and touching...

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-12-01 06:49 AM

thank you everyone..I am pleased when my words reach even one person *s

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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