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too much in love
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too much in love |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Am I not in love enough? Is there no muscle under fluff? I'll bet my eyes beg way too much. I am much too much in love. Which oils should I pour in bath? How can I make you smile--to laugh? How much of me is just enough? (I am much too much in love.) I want to be your everything. A nightingale in song to sing. I want the peaceful coo of dove. Am I much too much in love? I need your voice in every day-- I always wonder what you'd say... sometimes I worry you're all bluff. Yes, I am too much in love. Then I see your eyes in feast and smile because they feast on ME--- "I love you, love you, love you, "love,"-- too late--I am too much in love. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
me too... with your wonderful ways of writing, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Can one ever be too much in love? I think not...I know this feeling...enjoyed your thoughts. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
serenity, Oh I like this one *smiles* I can very well relate  And I don't think you can ever be to much in love.. it's such a wonderful thing and such a blessing  Hugs, Tara |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
ME tooooooooooooooooo!!!!!! like this one. But then again i like them all. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Is there any such thing as "too much in love?" Sounds like you have a hearty helping of it, anyway I love it. Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I'll have a heaping helping of this~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh yes....yes, I know this one by heart Perfect Serenity!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling*Hey, I want to be too much in love. *grin* I don't think one can ever love too much. I love the whole feel of this wonderful poem. **hugs**Just keep on loving him with all your heart. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that's not a bad thing to be in. . . wonderful. . . it sounds like it should be a song. . .a Broadway song. . . I can hear the final chorus now. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Then I see your eyes in feast and smile because they feast on ME--- "I love you, love you, love you, "love,"-- too late--I am too much in love. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh this is great! No way...never too much in love....can't happen....nope! Love this I do! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sorry.... but you can't be "too much in love"... it's impossible it's almost masochistic, though LOL... so i get your point nice write serene-one |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Oh, this is so so wonderful! *SMILE* I love this write. Being too much in love is the perfect love. Excellent! "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there is never too much in love, in fact I'd ask for more or to be more.... I know so well these feelings.....you do them beautifully.... Greeneyes~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Alright girl, you just keep singing such hapy songs . You know, I was bubbling over like this before my trip..But it turned out I WAS too much in love. For him anyway. But you never know, right? Love is a good thing, I swear it is, no matter how much it kicks me in the butt. Sandra |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An awesome write! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Going against the general consensus here, I understand 'too much in love'. But by the time I realize it, it's just simply too late to be anything else. I'm already hooked and at the mercy of my captor. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes sometimes it jumps from casual to too much in love in a very short period of time and it seems to be an overload...good for you...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all, and I could have sworn I heard a collective groan of "there she goes again..." from the forum as I posted this one. (Must have been those people in my head again! ) Thanks again to all of you with love and hugs! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Excellent write, going straight in my library, I enjoyed this very much Thank you for sharing it. Regards, Olias. |
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