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Stolen Time
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Stolen Time |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Stolen Time: A Gloom Sonnet Releasing from the moments of last meet, To random thoughts that often cry defeat. Just one more time, my land of dreams doth fade, Exhausted into shadows, fears invade. Unwrap me from the downfall of depress. Relinquish all events that cause the dread, Leaving all that weighs heavy in my head, Replenish hope, renew me with inspire, Drain from me the loss, fill with desire. Reverse the tide of thoughts that claim, oppress. Undoing what's been done, this source of doom, Disengaging, divorce of thoughts that loom, The doing of my day deep into night, I die a thousand deaths, till comes the light. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like the form of this so much I'd like to try it myself....sort of has the structure of a house in the south....lots of tall ceilings and windows facing North wind..smile... leaves me all in a ponder...lovely write! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very interesting write... fantastic form... and great phrasing like 'divorce of thoughts that loom'... Thanks for sharing, regards, sudhir |
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