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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2001-11-28 12:53 PM


              “SPECIAL MOMENTS”
                            by
                        Bill Charles
                          ~~~~
I listen to your sighs, as I touch silken hair,
        your heart beats delicately,
                saying you care…
Tender fingers know me, but they never tease,
        my fears leave me,
                on the gentle night breeze…

I’ve tasted the magic, only you possess,
        and sense it inside,
                with each soft caress…
A spell you have cast, placing it onto me,
        never will I feel the same,
                nor want to be…

Eyes gaze warmly, I see your charming smile,
        wanting all your love,
                if only for awhile…
I have known you totally, yesterday and today,
        these special moments,
                will never fade away…
                          ~~~~



© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Greeneyes
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1 posted 2001-11-28 12:57 PM


never let them fade.....its grand isnt it??

~~
Lauren~


I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-28-2001).]

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-11-28 01:21 AM


We all need those magic moments...James
peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-11-28 01:24 AM


The more magic the more memories.
Peaches

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4 posted 2001-11-28 01:32 AM


This is magical and loving. I especially like this line:

"A spell you have cast, placing it onto me,
        never will I feel the same,
                nor want to be…"


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5 posted 2001-11-28 01:34 AM


ever will I feel the same,  nor want to be…
Oh my, Bill this poem is soooooooooooo warming2the heart and ya know that one verse sum's it all up the essence of true love two people share...
Beautifully expressed PoetFriendBill...
*~coco~*

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-11-28 05:35 AM


very beautiful...*s

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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7 posted 2001-11-28 07:12 AM


Bill,

     Just beautiful Bill You have such a way with words.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Startime
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8 posted 2001-11-28 10:28 AM


*sigh* Thank you for sharing such special moments of tenderness with me. This is so beautiful. It is wonderful to know that men remember the gentle times. You write it in such a wonderful way. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-11-28 11:26 AM


This is gorgeous Bill! Many more special moments will be made by you and your loved one!
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10 posted 2001-11-28 11:58 AM


BC my friend. . . you pull out the heart beats so well. . .

great job. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2001-11-28 01:48 PM


To all - I again thank all of you for your most special replies to my writings. You are the greatest. Thank you again...

BC

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