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peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

0 posted 2001-11-27 11:23 PM

My emotions are like a roller coaster going up and down.
Turning inside out and all around.
Sometimes I am very glad.
Sometimes I am truly sad.
There's many times I shed a river of tears.
And hide in my shell with all of my fears.
Sometimes I am oh so happy.
Sometimes I feel really sappy.
The days I love to be romantic.
I try so hard not to be a fanatic.
When it come to darknes I'm scared at night.
Constantly searching for the light.
Interesting, emotional, and all of these things.
Rolled into a ball is what's inside of me.

Peaches

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-27 11:32 PM

Hey...there is nothing wrong with that. I am the emotional type. I respond to every poem from my emotions and sometimes I just get it all wrong but at least it proves I have feelings and not a heart of ice so be proud you have emotions to express. I sure like the way you write about them. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-11-27 11:32 PM

A bundle of ups and downs
overs and unders
rolling all around
inside of you.....
sounds normal to me.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

3 posted 2001-11-27 11:46 PM

Startime: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Midnitesun: Normal to me anyways.

Peaches

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

4 posted 2001-11-27 11:59 PM

I feel all of these emotions often too!
Sometimes I feel more than one emotion at the same time, have you felt like that?
: )

RP

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2001-11-28 12:08 PM

RosePetal: Yes, I am the emotinal whirlwind too many at one time.
Peaches

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

6 posted 2001-11-28 07:19 AM

I must admit..I'll have to join you on the ride..sometimes the first dip is really harrowing..but we just hang on don't we! I truly enjoyed this!!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2001-11-28 07:25 AM

Yes, I know what you mean. Sometimes I wish I could turn those emotions off. It can be quite a ride, sometimes exhilerating, sometimes painful

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2001-11-28 12:19 PM

indeed. . . I don't remember asking for this ticket. . .

wonderful. . . I liked the meter and the flow here. . . just one little thing. . .

quote:
When it come to darknes I'm scared at night.
Constantly searching for the light.
Interesting, emotional, and all of these things.
Rolled into a ball is what's inside of me.

there's a missed "s" on the word darkness. . . and, for the end, you lose the meter you've set up in the poem, how about trying this?

Interesting, emotional, and all of these.
Rolled into a ball is what's inside of me.

I just took out the word "things". . .it keeps the meter and rhymes with "me" . . .just a suggestion. . .

Hope that it helps. . . great job. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

9 posted 2001-12-03 11:10 AM

"RoLlErCoAsTer Of LoVE!!!"
you are a very good poet, peaches..

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2001-12-03 11:15 AM

(big hugggsssssss) And you always write out your emotions so beautifully, sweet friend! (smiles) I am a very sensitive person too, but I enjoy expressing all my emotions, and believe it is a blessing. (sigh) Soooooo wonderful, dear Peaches, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

11 posted 2001-12-03 11:52 AM

Regina:Glad you enjoyed it.

Tracey:You hit it right on the money.

Sven:Thank you so much.I need all the help I can get.

Eagle:Thank you so much.That's definetly me a roller coaster of emotions.

Noah: Thank you so much, I actually believ I'm getting just a little bit better.

Peaches

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