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Gentle Night, Inspire
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Gentle Night, Inspire Come, gentle night, entreat visionary sword as once more, sweet night, softer words accord ’tween rain of yesterday, before morrow’s sun come, gentle night, release dreams just begun... to walk among the winter’s whiter scape rhinestones blanketing evergreen’s drape gentle night shed this gloom, leave me quiet as dreaming alone seeks soul’s sweet riot ah, gentle night, what dreams may yet implore to allow me tread yon halls to darkened door as curtained thoughts still veil my sense what payment seeks thee in recompense when one sorely needs Inspire, so dearly paid at any cost! quickly, before evening fades find pen! parchment! pray swift comes the muse gentle night, slumbering, still slightly enthused before me, blankest sheet, to be scratched by quill gentle night, shivering, Inspire touched by Will ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 27 November 2001 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Someone is inspired! This is really beautiful. I can picture you with quill in hand, "willing" the words to "blankest sheet" and dropping sparkling poetic diamonds all over the page, with a magical flick of a wrist. Very inspiring! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhhhhhha to be inspired. Goodness this is lovely.  eloquent in every way. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is very lovely Sunshine and inspiring in itself. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Your words are inspiring to us all. Peaches |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
With such an open heart, you always inspire more than you know. Delivering beauty that flows just right....always. Sincerely, Regina |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this inspiration brought out the "lovely" in your words..and one could take some of it in different meaning..as your inspire of Will reminded me of our Wilfred Yeats..and how inspiring he was, also. Thank you, Karilea. ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
B E A U T I F U L X N Q S U P I N S P I R E S R W I L L A L W A Y S T T B E L I K E O R S U N S H I N E G A R D S U D H I R |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
oh inspiration thy sweet name is Karilea inspiring us all Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Come, gentle night, entreat visionary sword as once more, sweet night, softer words accord ’tween rain of yesterday, before morrow’s sun come, gentle night, release dreams just begun... to walk among the winter’s whiter scape rhinestones blanketing evergreen’s drape gentle night shed this gloom, leave me quiet as dreaming alone seeks soul’s sweet riot ==================================== I read this gem last night but my comp wasnt letting me do many replies without getting booted... it was a perfect late night read... this is indeed lovely Sun..in its imagery, rhyme and vocb flow and in its level of inspire. Classic K poetry...submit this beauty to the main site girlie.  he said ... "dont cry" ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, Everyone. Janet Marie, perhaps I shall take your sage advice... never question your Muse! |
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