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walker
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0 posted 2001-11-27 05:26 PM



Goodnight my love
hope your dreams
are bright
And if you dream
about me
may those dreams
include kisses
the ones I've
been saving
for when we are together
at last
Goodnight
my love
hopefully I'll dream
of you
giving you sweet kisses
that I miss so much
And one night soon
we will be together
kiss goodnight and remember
our time apart
yearning

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-11-27 05:27 PM


Beautiful!
Do you think it would help if you got rid of the 'gator

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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with you
2 posted 2001-11-27 05:29 PM


wonderful...nothing like saved up kisses  

"If your ship doesn't come in, swim out to it." ~Jonathan Winters

Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-27 05:31 PM


*sigh* a goodnight kiss....how absolutely wonderful. You will make up for all the kisses missed once you are together. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

wornways
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4 posted 2001-11-27 05:32 PM


nicely done indeed
your heart's yearning spoken clear
and with eloquence
desires long held made plain
i know she will adore this

WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments.

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5 posted 2001-11-27 05:33 PM


*Muah*
How about some hugs too? hehe

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-11-27 10:10 PM


Beautiful Walker, I love this. Dreams, goodnight kisses...I could have written this myself. But since I didn't, maybe I'll just pop this in my library and read it again later

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

peaches73533
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7 posted 2001-11-27 10:45 PM


Sweet goodnight kisses.I love it and you will have plenty to come.
Peaches

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