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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-11-27 04:58 PM




With A Heart Crying In Sadness
By: Noah Eaton
11/27/01

The day I first
Knew love so true
I instantly
Fell in love with you
Now deep down
My heart is bleeding
We're so far apart
I'm scared you will never be with me…

With a heart crying in sadness
Of such sweet sorrow
If we ever meet
I'll promise you love eternity
With a heart breaking in sadness
Marred in days of broken memories
Is our love extenuate?
Will you be here with me?

I solicit for hope straight
I plead to God at night
With fingers clenched together
Pressed up tight
If I will ever hold her close
Be the loving person I want to be
Caress a face
Of a love so heavenly…

With a heart crying in sadness
Of such sweet sorrow
If we ever meet
I'll promise you love eternity
With a heart breaking in sadness
Marred in days of broken memories
Is our love extenuate?
Will you be here with me?
Here with me…

If I had just one wish
With these cold empty hands
I would sweep her off her feet
And I can understand
That we are meant to be
This fragile heart won't break
And someday before I die
I'll have a loving soulmate

I'm falling to my knees
My lovesick heart bleeds
Oh God, let me be with her please
She is the love of my dreams
I need you so badly
I want you so dearly
I've never asked for something so badly
I want to love somebody

With a heart crying in sadness
Of such sweet sorrow
If we ever meet
I'll promise you love eternity
With a heart breaking in sadness
Marred in days of broken memories
Is our love extenuate?
Will you be here with me?

I'm lonely
I feel I have nobody
I want you, my love
My heart weeps for you
With a heart crying in sadness…

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-27 05:05 PM


Put your heart to work, dear Noah. Love can always find a way. It may take work and time but in the end it will be worth every effort you make to hold true love in your arms. I join my prayers to yours that you will be filled with the love you so desire. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

RosePetal
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2 posted 2001-11-27 05:10 PM


Awww...don't let your heart cry. For You are going to have true love and happiness, its only a metter of time. ((((Big Hugs))))

Daniel J D
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3 posted 2001-11-27 05:42 PM


A fine poem. I hope you are coping well. One thing for sure the heart really feels sadness, but it can recover with a little help.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-11-27 09:08 PM


I believe we all get our chance at love...James
rwood
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5 posted 2001-11-27 09:45 PM


Yes..James is right and you are so deserving. You may feel alone in a crowded room simply because your heart is overwhelmed with need for one..who is missing you with every brush of crowded room she meets the same. It will come Noah. Please believe. Prayers for virtuous meet of beautiful hearts. Love and Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 11-27-2001).]

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-11-27 09:49 PM


Noah, my heart is breaking over this one. You have written this pain so beautifully, but the pain still cries through. I hope you get your wish dear one. You have such a big heart, and we all love you so much for it. I hope your wish comes true.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
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7 posted 2001-11-27 10:05 PM


noah, be patient.
i think (duh) that (duh) you've got (duh) nothing (duh) to worry (duh) about, because (duh) joanna's not gonna let you get away ( :P )
so there.
-Dave

peaches73533
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OK, USA
8 posted 2001-11-27 10:49 PM


Noah,
I'm so sorry your hear is in so much pain.Know that you will have that love and be able to give thelove you have to share.MY heart and thoughts and prayers go out to you my dear frind.
Peaches

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