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Happiness (Tanka) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Everyday I yearn For a taste of your flavor Meaning of love learned Happiest I've ever been I have you to believe in |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Short, yet sweet! I like the flavor you provide in this one! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
1derful! Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* love has a tendency to do that to us and in so doing we also learn to believe in ourselves. I am so pleased about your happiness. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
someone to believe in.....that hopefully believes in us....wonderful words...  Lauren~ I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
such delightful words expressing depths of your heart love and devotion made clear in bright tanka crisp such as there can be no doubt WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
We all need someone and something to believe in and you have tied it all together quite well in your Tanka. It looks easy to wrap the thoughts up in so few words but to those who have done them ... we know better. Well done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (kiss on lips) Oh Joanna, you're always so loving and special to me! (smiles) You are the girl of my dreams, and you have given me something to believe in too always! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet love! (kiss on lips) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Like it a lot!! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
GR8 Tanka indeed. GR8 expression of happiness Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Deeply lovely Joanna! I believe for you in this. So great to connect with one in passion and in faith. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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