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lunatic
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0 posted 2001-11-27 02:53 PM


dream of our meeting
let us drink love from our lips
as moonbeams bathe us

Inspired by:   The fading mist


Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

© Copyright 2001 Man in the Moon - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-11-27 02:59 PM



You must be taking lessons from others who enjoy this poetic form...you do it very well...

Thank you!

emily
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2 posted 2001-11-27 03:00 PM


very well done!~
Startime
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3 posted 2001-11-27 03:15 PM


*sigh* I am so glad to have inspired these words for they touch me with such a gentle dreamlike feeling to them. I love this poem and will add it to my library. *sigh* to sip from the lips of love. How incredibly wonderful that would be. You have written as though from my own heart. **hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-27-2001).]

RosePetal
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4 posted 2001-11-27 03:22 PM


This is so gorgeous! I recently learned how to write in this style, my dear friend Noah taught me. You do it magnificently!

RP

Domzi
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5 posted 2001-11-27 03:25 PM


Great poem!
It's love, sensuality
and romance rolled up
into one.

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

lunatic
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6 posted 2001-11-27 03:31 PM


Sunshine - Thank you.  Big compliment I will always treasure.

Emily - Thank you  

Startime - You are the source of inspiration to many it seems  

RosePetal - Yes, I like this form also    Thank you for the wonderful comment.

Domzi - What a wonderful compliment! Thank you  


Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

[This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 11-27-2001).]

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