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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-11-27 01:50 PM


I was not blessed with beauty
Nor was I cursed with ugliness

My flesh was never something
One longed to gaze upon

I was a tormented child
To other's my difference's were something
To be joked about and riled

I grew up hearing snickers
Whispers
Being the bunt of  cruel practical jokes
And belittling statements

In a dark corner of my house
I wept

Fortunately for me
A teacher..

Praised one of my poems
Read it to my class

Said this is an example of a poem

Feelings poured out on paper
Coming from a heart
That is yours alone

I was not blessed with beauty
Nor was I cursed

© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-11-27 01:53 PM


You were blessed with the beauty of poetry.  Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-11-27 02:06 PM



Arent' teachers some of the most amazing people? We are blessed to have one among us, she knows who she is...

Teachers can make all of the different to a person, no matter what their age.  

Thank you for sharing this.  Heartfelt writes such as this poem is indeed a fine example of poetry in motion...

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-11-27 03:07 PM


all of what you've written, but no teacher, no poetry....so thankful you had that one person to make a difference when you needed it the most!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
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4 posted 2001-11-27 03:09 PM


You were blessed with the most treasured and lasting kind of beauty. The beauty of words that come from a loving heart that are able to touch all those who read them. BRAVO!!! I love this poem. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-11-27 03:10 PM


The gift of poetry you have been blessed with! Thank goodness for teachers, they are special people. I enjoyed this, thank you.

RP

Songbird
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6 posted 2001-11-27 05:29 PM


Yes, he did make a difference in my life..and I still remember his name. He was a wonderful teacher.
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