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Marina
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Pickering, Ontario

0 posted 2001-11-27 12:41 PM


Hello from Heaven


Hey, it's me! Letting you know I got here safe and sound
For I didn't stop living once you put me in the ground
I know through your tears it feels like goodbye
But please understand, it was only my body that did die
For at that exact moment of my passing
My soul embedded the eternal sound of you laughing
I now know that right now you need to do the weeping
For you can only picture my forever sleeping
But after you've wipe dry your eyes
Remember what I tell you now, and this is no lie


I was met by that person I have waited so long to see
And for the first time in ages I felt totally free
Though I was in bliss, alas you were still on my mind
Part of me wanting to come back not knowing what I'd find
So I stood for a moment hesitate within the light
For if I should go on, you'd be evermore out of sight
" Lay to rest your fear" said a most beautiful soft sigh
" My trust I will bestow to you" was my reply
It was then I understood my work on Earth was through
It was my time to move on, even if it meant leaving you


Your life must continue, don't dwell upon me I pray
And know that I think of you each and everyday
Though your eyes are blind to my new being
Believe me when I say, it is you that I am seeing
I hear your thoughts and feel your feelings
And I'm there looking out for you in all your dealings
But now my time is up, and back I must go
So you see, this is just the first message I wanted you to know
For I'll be back in your darkest hour
The Lord has blessed me with this amazing power


I will say not goodbye, for I am your leaven
Until the day I meet you again, in Heaven


Marina Nov. 26/2001


It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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Startime
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1 posted 2001-11-27 12:53 PM


Oh gosh I love this poem. My heart goes out to any who have ever lost a loved one. It is so true...it is only those left behind who grieve for they are now without their loved one being near. *sigh* I too believe they are not far away and someday we will be reunited with them again never to be seperated. **hugs** This is truly a masterpiece to heal the soul. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2001-11-27 08:06 PM


Your life must continue, don't dwell upon me I pray
And know that I think of you each and everyday
Though your eyes are blind to my new being
Believe me when I say, it is you that I am seeing
I hear your thoughts and feel your feelings
And I'm there looking out for you in all your dealings

*****************************************

Such wonderful words of wisdom and comfort coming from our little earth bound angel up north.  This creation you give us is definitely one of your best and I will be saving it for future reference.  Loved it and also loved seeing you in the forums again.  Don't let yourself become a stranger now ... ya hear??

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-11-27 09:03 PM


Wonderful expression of future desires...James
RosePetal
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4 posted 2001-11-27 09:52 PM


Oh Marina, this is full of truth.
I believe also that only the body dies!
Heaven must be beautiful, and one day we will see our loved ones up there and never again be separated from them!
Thank you for sharing this. It made my day!

Marina
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5 posted 2001-11-27 10:21 PM


Startime, thank you so very much.  I don't know anything about it being a masterpiece but I most certainly am glad it touched your soul.  The soul is true self that makes us who we are. Your compliants are too kind.  

Mark, an angel??? Me??? You defintely haven't been taling with my friends.  LOL.  But as always I do enjoy reading your comments and you know they mean a great deal to me.  Don't worry partner, I won't go far from the third tumbleweed.......promise.  


James, as always...thank you.  

Rosepetal, I am very happy I was able to make your day a little brighter.  I truly believe in every word I wrote.  No doubts in my mind.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



Sven
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6 posted 2001-11-27 10:55 PM


I know where this one comes from, it's good to see that you're listening to the spirit. . .

this is one of your best. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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OK, USA
7 posted 2001-11-28 12:40 PM


This remeinded me of what my English teacher told us before she died.
Peaches

Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-11-28 11:23 AM


*smiling at you and your wisdom's rhyme*
very very cool write Marina girl....
(and I wont touch MC's angel comment) rofl  
Its so good to see your muse gifting you with all these inspires....sometimes we forget all we have to do is listen with our hearts...then pick up our pens  
this is a butterfly poem for sure    

he said ... "dont cry" ...
said "it only hurts forever ... and all we have is time."

~Tabitha's Secret~

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
9 posted 2001-11-28 01:52 PM


Sven. thank you, but in actaul fact I have more then one person to thank for this piece.  One on this plain and one on other.

Peaches, I not sure if this piece made you feel good or bad in that case, but I hope it made you feel good.  For we truelly do not stop living once our body's die.

JM, girl...you better not go there!  LOL.  You could say of late I have had a great deal of inspiration as far as the last couple of new pieces of have written.  Some from my Dad who recently told me never to stop writing and always to do my best, as he was told I have had a talent for writing all my life and I never knew it.  And I have a wonderful friend of mine by the name of James Van Praggh.  He is the world renowed medium, and of late my new wonderful teacher to the world beyond.


So I have to say thank you to both of them.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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