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bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2001-11-27 11:28 AM

Without You

I sit here wondering what to do
Living my days without you.

For as the time, it passes by,
Thoughts, that it was all just a lie.

The heart that I thought I had gave,
Put into the bottle and into the grave.

Trying to mend the things from the past,
Just want to make the loving last.

For a different person over years I became,
Pushing you far away, man I was lame.

Try to mend the things that I have done,
Hoping you wait and you will not run.

For all I can do is try my best,
I know, every day this you will test.

Once in your life, you gave me your time,
Just want our hearts to once again chime.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-11-27 11:45 AM

There is that tenderness in your heart that you share with us... thank you...

regards,
sudhir

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

2 posted 2001-11-27 11:58 AM

I was once told that nothing in life was definite, absolute. Even though I've been hurt by this simple phrase once, I sometimes think this is true. As long as she has not finally given up hope on you, there's still time for you to make amends. If your love for her is deep, let her know that you still care, and I do hope that she'll see the good and learn to trust again.

Abigaile
Member

since 2001-10-21

Posts 112
San Mateo, CA

3 posted 2001-11-27 12:57 PM

This is very touching, and weel written. I am all for giving the heart another chance, even when it seems as though there is no reason. No matter how bad someone ever hurts you, or how bad you hurt them, some time and distance can heal anything. Two hearts that once found each other and completed each other can always do so again. *SMILE*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-27 01:01 PM

Love can heal much, and after reading your words it is clear that you love enough to try and make up for all the errors made. My heart goes out to you for when the healing is done the love between you both will be stronger than it ever was before. Beautiful, heartfelt poem. **hugs** All you can do is your best.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

5 posted 2001-11-27 02:21 PM

Your longing is palpable in this, Bernie. Best wishes....

God bless America, my home sweet home.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-11-27 04:28 PM

I feel ya on this one. Very well written.

RP

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

7 posted 2001-11-27 04:47 PM

Wonderful Bernie! You've captured the regret of the past and the desire to rekindle what was lost beautifully in this piece. Very emotive, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2001-11-27 05:20 PM

Bernie, this reaches right out, and touches the heart......*s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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