navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #17 » morning joy
Open Poetry #17
Post A Reply Post New Topic morning joy Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-11-27 04:56 AM


pretty face
is in playful vibe
little girl
has eye of mischief

looks keenly
at me looking too
while busy
brushing her doll's locks

'goldilocks'
she calls her baby
dressed in smiles
coloured all in pink

pretty face
holds a pretty face
i'm lucky
i'm studying joy

happiness
is her face - inspired
pretty face
is poetry - true

indeed so!

~~~  ~~~  ~~~
Tram rides are such an experience. 25 minutes of watching sheer joy on the pretty face of that (I guess) 7 year old girl, playing with her cute doll, unmindful of the cold world outside. That's a great way that today found to say 'Good Morning' to me!

I simply had to share this "Good Morning" wish with all of my friends

regards
~sudhir~

© Copyright 2001 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-11-27 05:16 AM


pretty face
holds a pretty face
i'm lucky
i'm studying joy

loved it...*s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2001-11-27 07:25 AM


And a hearty "Good Morning!" to you my friend!    What a wonderfully charming picture you've painted for us this morning. This was simply delightful!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2001-11-27 07:42 AM


Good Morning Sudhir - What a wonderful way to start the day - Thank you, kind Sir..
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2001-11-27 07:46 AM


To many, she went unnoticed.
To you, she was poetry
You engrave beauty in your heart
Lovely way to start my day
Thank you
Liz

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
5 posted 2001-11-27 08:22 AM


very cool write..what a cool "good morning" to you  

enjoyed..

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-11-27 10:19 AM


Sounds like you were enjoying being in the moment with another...and that IS joy...your spirit transcends cultures my friend. Reading YOU is a joy!
catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2001-11-27 10:58 AM


How lovely, it is a beautiful thing, to watch a cild engrossed in life.
Thanks for sharing this.
Sandra

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
8 posted 2001-11-27 01:42 PM


Thank you all so much, my friends, for sharing my morning joy...  

regards,
sudhir

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #17 » morning joy

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary