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Dusty Rhodes
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0 posted 2001-11-27 02:19 AM



Secret smile crossing delicate lips
Sideways glance of eyes saying all
To match the blue line pulsating with life
Tracing delicately down white neck

Grace of hand as it moves in air
With the softness of touch as it stops in rest
Small laugh tingling with musical tones
All these are treasures for my mind to keep

In the times of depart, that is all there is
To savor as the fragrance of a fresh bloomed rose
Counting the hours until the return
Warmed in the heart by the thoughts of you


© Copyright 2001 Dusty Rhodes - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-11-27 02:29 AM


This is exquisite! What a great first post.

"Grace of hand as it moves in air
With the softness of touch as it stops in rest"

You have written some wonderful imagery here.  Welcome, and please, share more of your beautiful poetry.

bslicker
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state of mind
2 posted 2001-11-27 05:48 AM


Welcome and great write.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2001-11-27 06:14 AM


I love your soft thoughts ..*s  Welcome

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-11-27 07:01 AM


Welcome to Passions Dusty Rhodes! What a beautifully enchanting first post ... I hope to read more!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-11-27 09:06 AM



Beautiful First Post!
I'll be looking for your name again here at Passions!
Memories of someone special wonderfully expressed.
   ~hugs, NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2001-11-27 09:26 AM



Welcome to Passions!  This is a wonderful way to enter your new home, with a poem that will suit every one's fancy...

check your E-mail for a special Greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-11-27 09:31 AM


A beautiful and graceful write here. Welcome! I look forward to more!  
Poet deVine
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8 posted 2001-11-27 07:12 PM


Welcome to our humble home. I really enjoyed this it's so lovely and gentle....I look forward to reading more of your work.    
Startime
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9 posted 2001-11-27 07:14 PM


WOW!!!Sensually romantic. Welcome to passions. I can see that I am going to love your writing all ready. **hugs**  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
10 posted 2001-11-27 07:19 PM




Wonderfully romantic with such beautifully painted images.....

Welcome to Passions.....

Thank you
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Dusty Rhodes
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11 posted 2001-11-27 07:29 PM


Thank you so much, Midnitesun for those kind words of welcome. Hopefully, I will post some more that you will enjoy

Thank you for your welcome, Bernie, glad to be here

Why, thank you, Wynter, I look forward to reading yours also

Kit, what a nice thing to say, thank you.

What a nice welcome, Nancy Lee, I appreciate your kind words

Sunshine, thank you for the poem and welcome, it is very nice of you to do so.

Serenity, thank you for your kind welcome. It is very kind of you to read this

Poet de Vine, thank you for your welcome, very kind of you.

Startime, what a wonderful thing for you to say, thank you so much.

My Enchanted Melody, thank you for such kind words. I appreciate you taking the time for this read

Martie
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12 posted 2001-11-27 08:18 PM


Welcome to Passions, Dusty Rose.  This is a lovely first post, romantic and hopefilled!
Irish Rose
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13 posted 2001-11-27 09:10 PM


welcome to Passions, look forward to reading more.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Cerenity
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14 posted 2001-11-27 09:16 PM


Hi Dusty Rhodes,

This is awesome work and so full of wonderful imagery, welcome to Passions and I look forward to more of your poetry.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
15 posted 2001-11-27 09:40 PM


What a lovely entrance you have made to passions. A big welcome to you

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Eloise
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16 posted 2001-11-27 09:44 PM


Welcome to Passions.  Very lovely piece.  Will look forward to reading more.  
Lady In White
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17 posted 2001-12-19 08:15 AM



One might say You have a marvelous way with words...

Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
18 posted 2002-02-04 10:19 PM


One might just say what someone said above. You have a wonderous way with words. I love this. How did this get buried?

I am many.

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