As I Crawl Across The Floor

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Open Poetry #17

As I Crawl Across The Floor

Robert William Gruhn
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since 2001-11-06

Posts 168
California, USA

0 posted 2001-11-27 12:05 PM

As I crawl across the floor

Breathing dust,

From my shoes

Choking....gagging,

On the past tracks of so many others

It's so cold down here,

Where no one can look up to you

Or would,

Even if they could

The light under that door,

Looks so inviting ,

Is it my salvation,

Or only Hell's crimson glow

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-11-27 06:16 AM

The light under that door,
Looks so inviting ,

kind of like the grass is always greener...well, at least it made me think of that *s

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-11-27 09:58 AM

Wow...I believe this is the first I've read from you and this is very intense my friend (I LIKE intense...smile) The tone of ambiguous feeling and self questioning is very thought provoking...enjoyed this much!

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

3 posted 2001-11-27 10:04 AM

Wow! what a statement!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

4 posted 2001-11-27 01:14 PM

WOW!!!!Sir Robert this poem is so incredibly powerful. Very well put. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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